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My father and GBS Syndrome This is a story about my father who get Guillain-Barre syndrome (GBS ) on January 2017. When he had attached by GBS I was on my KKM places. KKM in bahasa is Kuliah kerja mahasiswa. A college student forms a group with another major from the same college. We must go to a village and make a change to the villagers' life by doing something for them. On Monday 30 January I Had a chance to go home for take a rest at home on three days. but unfortunately, when I arrived at my home, there is nobody in my home. My auntie tell me that my mother brought my father to hospital on Friday but she don't know the reason. She just tell me that my father can't do anything. his body can't move, his only can breath and wink his eyes. It's almost like the symptom of Stroke. After hear about conditions of my father, i take a deep breath and i start to drop my tears. I go to hospital by motorcycle. when I arrived the only thing that can i do is just crying besides his shoulder. At that time, Me, My mother and everyone in that room don't know what happened with my father. Even the doctor keep searching the cause. On Tuesday, the doctor take a kind of liquid from my father spinal (back bone). And on Wednesday the doctor tell my mother that my Father attached Guillain-Barre syndrome (GBS ). This syndrome attache my father brain that controlled the activity of fibrilla in his body that makes my father can't move. I'ts been 4 months passed since my father sick. and now he was better and even he can walk and talk as usual. I think this is the hardest test in my life that God give it to me. But after all this situation gone, now i know who is friend that always stay besides me in my lower situation.And thank to god because he gave me hard situation that makes me stronger and teach me how the important to keep healt.

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My father and GBS Syndrome

This is a story about my father who got Guillain-Barre syndrome (GBS ) in January 2017. When he was attacked by GBS I was on my KKM. KKM in Bbahasa is short for Kuliah Kerja Mmahasiswa. As a college student, I had to form a pair with another major from the same college. We must go to a village and make a change to the villagers' lives by doing something for them.

On Monday 30 January I had a chance to go home for three days to rest but unfortunately, when I arrived there was nobody there. My auntie told me that my mother brought my father to hospital on Friday but she did not know the reason. She just told me that my father was paralysed. His body could not move, he could only breathe and wink his eyes. It was almost like the symptoms of a sStroke.

After hearing this, Ii took a deep breath and started to cry. I rode to the hospital by motorcycle. Wwhen I arrived the only thing that I could do was just to cry over his shoulder. At that time, mMe, mMy mother and everyone in that room did not know what had happened to my father. Even the doctor kept searching for the cause.

On Tuesday, the doctor took some fluid from my father's spine (back bone). And on Wednesday the doctor told my mother that my fFather had Guillain-Barre syndrome (GBS ). This syndrome attacked the part of my father's brain that controls the activity of fibrilla in his body and this meant that my father could not move.

It has been 4 months since my father got sick and now he is better and can even walk and talk as usual.
I think this is the hardest test in my life that God has given me. But now it is over I know who is my friend, who always stays besides me in my despair. And thanks to god because he gave me this trial to make me stronger and teach me how important it is to keep healthy.

very well written!

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thank you so much :)
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may god bless you!

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