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Dennis.Li's notebook entry: May 13, 2011 Yesterday , I went to the cinema to see a film callde "the fast and the furious" with my friends.It's so amazing,and the view in Brazil is so beautiful .I wish i can travel there oneday.

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Dennis.Li's notebook entry: May 13, 2011

Yesterday, I went to the cinema to see a film calledde "The Fast and the Furious" with my friends. It's so amazing, and the view in Brazil is so beautiful. I wish I can travel there oneday.

Titles and proper nouns are always capital, so it would be "The Fast and the Furious". And when using commas, you don't need to use a space beforem but you need one after. The letter I by itself is always capital because it is referring to yourself, which is a proper noun.
It sounds fun! I want to see that movie too!
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Dennis.Li's notebook entry: May 13, 2011

Yesterday , I went to the cinema to see a film called "The Fast and the Furious" with my friends. It's so amazing, and the view in Brazil is so beautiful .I wish I can travel there oneday.

Hiii, how are you? yeah of course the film it's amazing! I love it, I love all of them, it is really awesome!
I'm waiting for the part 6 :P
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Oh sorry I forgot to correct you the word "oneday" this word is correct: "one day" :)

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