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Formal:
Valentina Kuhn is a determined student who is in the first grade. She is a member of Rotary`s International volunteer group. As she has theatre experience she has great speaking skills and is also a very sociable person. Besides that, she is an active girl who loves sports and is currently playing tennis. In her theatre career, Valentina has already performed in three plays, which are: “Macbeth”, “O Auto da Compadecida”, and “Bailei na Curva”, always amazing everyone with her great talent. Nowadays she is looking forward to play tennis in tournaments and is also thinking about making a long-term exchange in the next year.
Informal:
My husband and I have just moved to Canadá and we intend to open a portuguese language course soon. We have been married since 2010, and our wedding was just the best. We had a Portuguese ceremony in Brazil, and now we`re thinking about having an English ceremony here in Canada. Ohh, we love each other so much, this would be really great!!! Well, we're both teachers and we love to learn from our students, because teaching is the best way to learn! So if you're interested in having some portuguese classes, just send an email, and come for a trial class, see you.
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Formal:
Informal:
My husband and I have just moved to Canada and we intend to open a Portuguese language course soon. We have been married since 2010, and our wedding was just the best. We had a Portuguese ceremony in Brazil, and now we`re thinking about having an English ceremony here in Canada. Ohh, we love each other so much, so this will be really great!!! We're both teachers and we love to learn from our students because teaching is the best way to learn! So if you're interested in having some Portuguese classes, just send us an email and come for a trial class! See you!
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