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Miracles only to smart kids I have two boys wonderfull. Despite both having the same education and attention, they are very very differents. The youngest think the he is more smart of really is. And the oldest think that is less smart of really is. Recently, the youngest hurted a little bit his knee. But to him, was like a heart surgery. Then, he decided to use this situation to get more attention of his family. Is an absurd, but he picked up the support to walk of his grandmother and started to walk with big difficultie at home. So, my oldest boy and me were watching TV and we saw a nice thing at the TV, when the "hurted" boy listened the TV and our comments, came up running: A miracle! He was cured. No, he wasn't. Because when he realized the big mistake his did, immediatly returned to place that he was and acted like nothing was had happened. He believe that his old brother did not realized anytihing. But he realized. But his oldest brother decided "to participated" of " history" of his younger brother. He believe to act like that make his brother happyest.

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Miracles only happen to smart kids

I have two wonderful boys. Despite the fact that both get the same amount of education and attention, they are very very different. The youngest one thinks that he is smarter than he really is. And the oldest one thinks that he is not as smart as he really is.

Recently, the youngest hurt his knee a bit. But to him, it was like a heart surgery. Then, he decided to use this situation to get more attention from his family. It is absurd, but he gained the support to walk of his grandmother and started to walk with big difficulties at home. So, my oldest boy and I were watching TV and we saw a nice thing on the TV when the "hurt" boy listened to the TV and our comments and came up running: a miracle! He was cured.

No, he wasn't. Because when he realized the big mistake he did, he immediately returned to place that he was and acted like nothing was had happened. He believed that his old brother did not realize anything, but he did. His oldest brother still decided "to participated" of " history" of his younger brother (I do not understand this sentence very well. Perhaps you meant "His older brother still decided to pretend as if nothing has happened":). He believe to acted like that keep his brother happy.

-The comparative form of smart is smarter, if you need some more clarification on this, then I advise you to visit this link:
http://www.ef.com/english-resources/english-grammar/comparative-and-superlative/
-Unlike most English verbs, the past tense of the word hurt doesn't change and thus stays hurt.

You have done a good job. I advise you to write more entries, and with each correction, your English will surely improve.
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Miracles only to smart kids

I have two wonderful boys wonderfull. Despite both having the same education and attention, they are very very differents. The youngest thinks the  that he is more smart of smarter than he really is, and the oldest think that is less smart of really doesn't realise how smart he really is.

Recently, the youngest hurted a little bit his knee a little bit. But to him, it was like a heart surgery. Then, he decided to use this situation to get more attention of from his family. Is an absurd, but he picked up the support to walk of his grandmother and started to walk with big difficultie at home. So, my oldest boy and me were watching TV and we saw a nice thing at the TV, when the "hurted" boy listened the TV and our comments, came up running: It is absurd, but he picked up his grandmother's walking support and was walking around the house with great difficulty. Then, when my oldest boy and I were watching an enjoyable show on the TV, the "hurt" boy heard us and came running over. A miracle! He was cured.

No, he wasn't. Because when he realized the big mistake his did he had made, he immediately returned to his original place that he was and acted like nothing was had happened. He believed that his old brother did not realized anytihing what had occurred. But he realized. But his oldest brother decided "to participated" of " history" of his younger brother The older brother decided to "believe" the "story" of his younger brother. He believed  that to acting like that this way would make his brother happyest happy.

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