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A Trip to a Nature Park Today, I took my family to go to a Nature Park, which is the largest park in my city. It is an 4A level park, but the improtant thing is it is free to visit. We arrived at about noon, when the sun was the highest in the sky of a day. It was very hot. We bought some ice cream at the gate. Then we rented a three-person bicycle. It was a funny stuff. It was not that bicycle which was ridden by two people in tandem, but it was that bicycle which we can ride side by side. You know what, just like we were driving a car. This project was not free, we need pay 50 yuan for two hours riding and leave 150 yuan as deposit. That was not too expensive, we can afford it. In that two hours, we almost rurned around the park, I saw the central lake, the zoo, and the flowers of an exhibition, in addition to these, there also were a lot of recreation facilities in the park. There were a lot of kids palyed in, they of course were accompanied by their parents. They played so happy, yeah, we were, too. But....The only fly in the ointment is that I got a cold....

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A trip to a nature park

Today, I took my family to go to a nature park, which is the largest park in my city. It is an 4A level park, but the important thing is it is free to visit.
We arrived at about noon, when the sun was the highest in the sky. It was very hot. We bought some ice cream at the gate. Then we rented a three-person bicycle. It was a very funny. It was not a bicycle that is ridden by two people in tandem, but it was a bicycle which we can ride side by side, just like we were driving a car. This bicycle was not free, we needed pay 50 yuan for two hours riding and leave 150 yuan as a deposit. That was not too expensive, we can afford it.
In that two hours, we went around the park. I saw the central lake, the zoo, and the flowers of an exhibition, in addition to these, there were a lot of recreation facilities in the park. There were a lot of kids playing in the park, who of course were accompanied by their parents. They played so happily. We were happy too. 


But....The only fly in the ointment is that I got a cold.... 

But the only downside was that I got a cold.

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