thanks for check and correct it ლ(╹◡╹ლ) this is my very first essay in italki，and i hope I can insist on writing my dairy in the coming horrible mouth when i will have four final exams. it's a good

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thanks for check and correct it ლ(╹◡╹ლ) this is my very first essay in italki，and i hope I can insist on writing my dairy in the coming horrible mouth when i will have four final exams. it's a good weather day , though, with a light sandstorm and a gental haze ，for the last few days all companied with heavy sandstorms .The air was visible yellow. I definately won't believe I'll satisfied with such air conditon before I left home to Tianjin , a province near Beijing , for going to university. people can always adapt to the circumstance ,with a surprising speed and span. that's all . Wish you a good day.

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thanks for check and correct it ლ(╹◡╹ლ)

this is my very first essay in italki，and i hope I can insist on writing my dairy in the coming horrible mouth when i will have four final exams.
it's a good weather day , though, with a light sandstorm and a gental haze ，for the last few days all companied with heavy sandstorms .The air was visible yellow.
I definately won't believe I'll satisfied with such air conditon before I left home to Tianjin , a province near Beijing , for going to university. people can always adapt to the circumstance ,with a surprising speed and span.
that's all .
Wish you a good day.

Here's how I would change this:

This is my very first essay in italki. I hope I can continue writing in my diary (?) in the next month when I will have four final exams.

The weather is good today, but with a light sandstorm and a gentle haze because the last few days have all had heavy sandstorms. The air was visibly yellow.

I definitely didn't think I'd be okay with air conditions like these before I left home to go to the university in Tianjin, a province near Beijing, but people can adapt to their circumstances with surprising speed.

That's all.

Have a good day.

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