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The She (short story) She points the gun to him. He doesn’t blink, he stays calm. She trembles, tears are falling on her face, anger fills the whole body. Light pressure on the trigger and she’ll take revenge for her brother. Will she feel relief or not, unknown. Her life will be changed forever. It will stay with her, it will become part of her essence. But she doesn’t think about it, anger and hate in her eyes. The time is frozen and each second like the eternity.

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The She (short story)

She points the gun at him. He doesn’t blink; he stays calm. She trembles, tears are falling on her face, and anger fills her entire/whole body. Light pressure on the trigger and she’ll take revenge for her brother. Whether she'll feel relief or not is unknown. Her life will be changed forever. It will stay with her; it will become part of her essence. But she doesn’t think about it, and there is anger and hate in her eyes. The Time is frozen, and each second seems like an eternity.


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The She (short story)

She points a gun at him. He doesn’t blink: he remains calm. She trembles, with tears falling down on her face, as anger consumes her the whole body. A light pressure on the trigger, and she’ll have her take revenge for her brother. Whether she feel relief after that or not is still far from certain. unknown. But she knows that her life will be forever changed. forever  It will stay with her. It will become part of her essence. But it doesn't matter to her, not when doesn’t think about it, there is so much anger and hatred in her eyes. The Time seems to have frozen, with and each second feeling like an eternity.
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