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Family - short essay part 1 Family life has surely changed in the last 50-100 years. The structure of families has changed since last century. More decades ago, more generation live together. The grandparents, the parents and their children live under one roof. However, this structure would be not imaginable these days. Most young people usually move from parents between 20 and 30 years of age. Roles within a family also has changed. Many many years ago father was the breadwinner and womens work at home and raise the children. Nevertheless, today, both parents are working and sometimes mother is the breadwinner. Furthermore, very rarely the father stay at home and raise the children if mutter’s salary is higher.

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Family - short essay part 1

Family life has surely changed in the last 50 to 100 years.

The structure of families has changed since the last century. Many decades ago, many generations lived together. The grandparents, the parents, and their children lived under one roof. However, this structure is not imaginable these days. Many young people usually move from their parents between 20 and 30 years old.

Also, family roles have changed. Many years ago, the father was the breadwinner, and the mother worked at home and raised her children. Nevertheless, today, both parents are working together and, sometimes, the mother is the breadwinner. Furthermore, the father rarely stays at home and raises his children if the mother’s salary is higher than the father's.

P.S. I tried my best to edit some parts. These might not be perfect, though.

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