Garlic and his life
When Garlic was young, he has been always dull. He was challenged society. He was not good at catering for others. He became silent and solitary.
Meanwhile, he often made mistakes on his job, so he had to apply for a new job again and again. One day, one of his father's friend introduced a job for him.
Since he entered into the enterprise,he made a decision to learn more and more in order to survive and change himself .
After 2 years, his son was born. Garlic felt he had a friend from now on. His heart got warm.Now he changed a new and bigger house for his family.His wife and son loved him. His life reaches smooth road.
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Garlic and his life
When Garlic was young, he has been was always dull. He was challenged society (He found society challenging). He was not good at catering for (coping with) others. He became silent and solitary.Meanwhile, he often made mistakes on in his job, so he had to apply for a new jobs again and again. One day, one of his father's friends introduced a job for him offered him a job .
Since he entered into began working in the enterprise, he made a decision to learn more and more in order to survive and change himself .
After 2 years (Two years later,) his son was born. Garlic felt he had a friend from now on. His heart got warm .(He felt happier)Now Then he changed moved to a new and bigger house for with his family.His wife and son loved him. His life reachesd a smooth road.
A few changes for you. Hope that helps! Helen.
ps. it's a sweet story!
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