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Never give up! Never give up! - i repeat it to myself every day. Never mind what about i think in the moment. I try to be a strong person at all situations. My life was easy never. i lost my mom when i was a baby. And this is changhed all in my future life. I knew i must to be strong for being succesfull. I developed my talents, tried to do a new things, lsuch us plaing gitar or chess, i looked for myself and my place in a society. I dont know if i achieved my goal, even today. i see, i go the long way. And the name of my way is "My Life". Sometimes there happens bad things and i meet a bad people, but most of them are became as my teachers in the end. I suppose we have to have difficults on our way for being stronger. We have to study all lessons live gives us. And we must never give up.

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Never give up!

Never give up! - I repeat it to myself every day. Never mind what  I think  about at the moment. I try to be a strong person in all situations. My life was never easy.I lost my mom when I was a baby. And this is changed everything in my future life.
I knew I had to to be strong to be succesfull.
I developed my talents, tried to do new things, such as playing the guitar or chess, I looked for myself and my place in society.
I dont know if I have achieved my goal, even today. I see, I go the long way. And the name of my way is "My Life". Sometimes bad things happen there and I meet  bad people, but most of them became my teachers in the end.
I suppose we have to have difficulties on our way to being stronger.
We have to study all the lessons life gives us.
And we must never give up.

Hello Snezhana,

It is good that you have such a strong character, you should never give up. Even when we think things can't get any worse there is always someone in a worse situation than us.

In English 'I' in front of a verb is always a capital (big) 'I', even if it is not at the beginning of a sentence.

Best wishes


Bob

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Just "And this is changed everything in my future life.
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Never give up!

Never give up! - i repeat it to myself every day. Never mind what about i think in the moment. I try to be a strong person at all situations.

> " Never give up!" I always tell myself everyday, never mind how bad the day is. I want to be mentally stronger in life. 

 My life was easy never. i lost my mom when i was a baby. And this is changhed all in my future life.

> My life was never easy. I lost my mum when I was a baby. And this has affected me throughout my life.

I knew i must to be strong for being succesfull. > I have to be strong if I want to be successful in life.

I developed my talents, tried to do a new things, lsuch us plaing gitar or chess, i looked for myself and my place in a society.

> I have been trying to develop my talents in whatever I think I am good at, and I have tried doing some new things, such as playing the guitar and chess. I just want to find myself and my place in society.


I dont know if i achieved my goal, even today. i see, i go the long way. > I do not know if I will ever achieve my goal, at least that is how feel about it right now. I will find out as I go along.

And the name of my way is "My Life". ?? > That is how I am living my live right now.

Sometimes there happens bad things and i meet a bad people, but most of them are became as my teachers in ?  the end.

>Sometimes, bad things happen to me, such as meeting people who treat me badly. But, in the end, all of them will turn out fine, just like how those people who had treated badly have become my friends now.
I suppose we have to have difficults on our way for being stronger. > I suppose we have to go through life's difficulties in order to come out stronger.
We have to study all lessons live gives us. > We have to learn all the lessons that life can give us.
And we must never give up. > To sum up, we must not give up on anything we want in life.

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