Tears - Part 2
Hatred or love. The first thing that I thought was “boys”. I think everyone has cried because of love. When we were children or teenagers, or even now that we are adults. Perhaps, we didn’t receive a reciprocate love. At least, in my case, I have many reasons! One time I cried like a child because I had a boyfriend who cheated me. I suffered a deep depression too. I hated that guy as you have no idea.
(Correct and make suggestions if you are a native English speaker or an English teacher. Thanks in advance)
Now then, I have cried because I have fallen in love like a crazy! Although it was at the beginning of my love story, but I felt happy because I was able to experience that. To experience how you feel when you and your crush have the same feelings for each other. I must say that that story is not about happiness at all.
It doesn’t matter the fact of why we express our feelings through crying or tears. It makes us know that we are able to generate emotions and feel them deeply.
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Tears - Part 2
Hatred *Hate or love. The first thing that I thought of was “boys”. I think everyone has cried because of love. When we were children or teenagers, or even now that we are adults. Perhaps, **we didn’t receive a reciprocated love. At least, in my case, I have many reasons! One time I cried like a child because I had a boyfriend who cheated on me. I suffered a deep depression too.*Hatred is not wrong, but hate is more commonly used.
**"we didn't receive a reciprocated love" is not wrong but not common. I would say "Perhaps our love was never reciprocated"
(Correct and make suggestions if you are a native English speaker or an English teacher. Thanks in advance)
Now then^, I have cried because I have fallen in love like a crazy! Although Even though it was at just the beginning of my love story, but I felt happy because I was able to experience that. To experience how you feel when you and your crush have the same feelings for each other. I must say that that story is not about happiness at all.
^Now then - Si quiere decir de vez en cuando diria Now and then.
It doesn’t matter the fact of why we express our feelings through crying or tears. It makes lets us know that we are able to generate emotions and feel them deeply. "Makes us know" sirve pero no suena natural a mis oidos.
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