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HI, could you please correct my CV? Evgeniya Female, 38 years old, was born on February, 9, 1979 Work experience as a lawyer—10 years January2007 — Until now Nizhny Novgorod Regional Advocate Association Advocate Conducting civil and criminal cases. In civil cases I represent the interests of individuals and legal entities In the field of Housing legislation, Land code, Administrative, Town-planning, Labor legislation. Legal counseling. Drafting of contracts in accordance with the customer's specifics. Activity on concluded contracts: negotiation, correspondence with contractors (Taking into account the Influence of ongoing work on the judicial perspective). Pretension work. Full court support until the final result: draw up the statement of claims, objections to the statement of claim / reviews Representation in courts. Representation in state bodies (or Public authorities? Or smth els?). Protection on preliminary investigation (counseling, preparation of requests, taking part (or participation) in investigative actions, appeal against actions and decisions of preliminary investigation bodies. Implementation of the defense in the trial stage (or proceeding?). Education: Higher education 2003 Nizhny Novgorod Academy of the Ministry of Internal Affairs (Police Academy) Faculty of Law 2000 Nizhny Novgorod State University. N.I. Lobachevsky Faculty of International Relations Additional Information: About me Purposeful, responsible, sociable.

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Hi, could you please correct my CV? [note: you'd call this a "resume" in the US job market]

Evgeniya
Female, 38 years old, date of birth February, 9, 1979

Work experience as a lawyer—10 years.
January 2007—Present Nizhny Novgorod Regional Advocate Association
Advocate [I'm assuming that this is a heading and not part of the following sentence]
Conducting civil and criminal cases. In civil cases I represent the interests of individuals and legal entities In the field of Housing legislation, Land code, Administrative, Town-planning, and Labor legislation.

Legal counseling. [is this a heading? If so, then lose the period]
Drafting of contracts in accordance with the customer's specifics.

Activity on concluded contracts: negotiation, correspondence with contractors (taking into account the influence of ongoing work on the judicial perspective). [not sure what the parenthetical part is intended to mean]

Pretension work. [if this is a heading then lose the period]
Full court support until the final result [isn't "verdict" appropriate here?]: drawing up the statement of claims, objections to the statement of claim / reviews representation in courts.

Representation in state bodies (or Public authorities? Or something else?). [hard to say: the correct term will depend on what you mean]

Protection on preliminary investigation (counseling, preparation of requests, taking part (or participation) in investigative actions, appeal against actions and decisions of preliminary investigation bodies.[I would refactor this so that you don't have nested parentheses]

Implementation of the defense in the trial stage (or proceeding?). [again, if you describe the concept you want to communicate that might make it easier for folks to help you find the right term.]

Education:
Higher education
2003 Nizhny Novgorod Academy of the Ministry of Internal Affairs (Police Academy) Faculty of Law
2000 Nizhny Novgorod State University. N.I. Lobachevsky
Faculty of International Relations


Additional Information:
About me: purposeful, responsible, sociable.
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HI, could you please correct my CV?

Evgeniya
Female, 38 years old, born on February, 9, 1979

Work experience as a lawyer—10 years
January 2007 — until now. Nizhny Novgorod Regional Advocate Association.
Conducting civil and criminal cases. In civil cases I represent the interests of individuals and legal entities. In the field of housing legislation, land law, aAdministrative, tTown-planning, lLabor legislation.

Legal counseling.

Drafting of contracts in accordance with customer specifications.

Activity on concluded contracts: negotiation, correspondence with contractors (Taking into account the iInfluence of ongoing work ?from? the judicial perspective).

Pretension work.???

Full court support until the final verdict: drawing up statement of claims, objections thereto / reviews Representation in courts.

Public Representation for the Authorities.*


Protection on preliminary investigation (counseling, preparation of requests, participation in investigative actions, appeals against actions and decisions of preliminary investigation bodies.

Implementation of the defense in the trial proceedings.

Education:
Higher education
2003 Nizhny Novgorod Academy of the Ministry of Internal Affairs (Police Academy) Faculty of Law,
2000 Nizhny Novgorod State University. N.I. Lobachevsky
Faculty of International Relations


Additional Information:
About me: decisive, responsible, sociable.

*I was not sure what you meant, and have assumed that you mean that you worked for the government, representing the public (in criminal cases and maybe civil). Or where you representing the Authorities against the public?

Very well wri

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