I was angry to my boyfriend yesterday, because ……
Yesterday we had a row about his attitude to others in gaming.
It's been a tough day for me. I can't imagine that he was so rude to strangers online just because some of our teammates's deficient performance. He used dirty words to those guys，keeping complaining from beginning to end. When I was trying to persuade him to behave himself, he even shouted at me.
I'd like to convince myself that he was just too anxious to win the game. In fact, he is a gentleman in reality, who was willing to help others. On contrary, he made himself like an unmannerly man yesterday.
In my eyes, virtual world is not an excuse for us to do bad things. We should always be polite to others.
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I was angry to my boyfriend yesterday, because ……
Yesterday we had a row fight/argument about his attitude towards others in gaming.It's been a tough day for me. I can't imagine that how/why he was so rude to strangers online just because some of our teammates's deficient("bad" sounds much more natural here, but "deficient" is not incorrect, it just sounds a little odd) performance. He used dirty words to those guys, and keeping kept complaining from beginning to end. When I was trying to persuade him to behave himself, he even shouted at me.
I'd like to convince myself that he was just too anxious to win the game. In fact, he is a gentleman in reality, who was is willing to help others. On the contrary, he made himself seem/look like an unmannerly rude man yesterday.
In my eyes, the virtual world is not an excuse for us to do bad things. We should always be polite to others.
Overall this is very well written! You used a lot of complicated grammar structures correctly, which is particularly difficult when coming from a language that doesn't even use the English alphabet. The mistakes were minor or just a matter of word choice. Good job!
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我给你更清楚的例子！
Yesterday I had an argument with my boyfriend. I was angry because of his attitude towards others whilst gaming.
It's been a tough day for me. I don't understand why he has to be so rude to strangers online just because they are playing badly. I've heard him use multiple rude words and he complains from beginning to end. When I tried to get him to behave himself, he shouted at me.
I'd like to think that he only reacted the way he did because he was so anxious to win the game. He is a gentleman really who is always willing to help others. But his actions yesterday made him seem like someone he is not.
In my eyes, a virtual world is no excuse for us to behave badly. We should always be polite to others.
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I was angry with my boyfriend yesterday, because ……
Yesterday we had a row about his attitude toward others in gaming.I was a tough day for me. I couldn't imagine that he would be so rude to strangers online just because some of our teammates' poor performance. He used dirty words and kept complaining from beginning to end. When I tried to persuade him to behave himself, he even shouted at me.
I'd like to convince myself that he was just too anxious to win the game. In fact, he is a gentleman in everyday life, always willing to help others. However, he behaved very impolitely yesterday.
To my eyes, interacting in the virtual world is not an excuse for us to do bad things. We should always be polite to others. :)
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Hi! I agree with you! In gaming especially, people are often very mean, and I don't understand why. We call this 'toxic' behavior in gaming. It sounds like your boyfriend was 'flaming' (saying cruel things out of anger). My husband thinks that people act this way because of the anonymity of the internet, but not every game has toxic players. I wish that people would just chill out and remember it was a game! No one has fun when there's a 'flamer'.
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昨天我们为他在游戏中对待别人的态度吵了一架。
昨天是难忘的一天，在此之前我无法想象他也会这样粗鲁地对待网线另一端的陌生人，就因为队友表现不佳。整场游戏他脏话谩骂，喋喋不休。我想劝他冷静点，他竟然还吼我。
我试着安慰自己说他只是太想赢罢了。毕竟在现实世界里他是那么的温文尔雅、乐于助人。不过即便如此，昨天晚上他的表现可真够糟糕的。
我觉得吧，虚拟世界并不是我们不受约束，举止粗鲁的借口。我们还是应该对这个世界和陌生人多一点善意，不是吗？
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