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Eating out Last week I went to a restaurant in the city center where I currently live, It had been ages since I last ate out. At first I didn't have anyone to go with so I decided to invite my dear friend Jane, apart from having dinner we could catch up each other because I had not seen her for quite a while. I called and told her about what I felt like doing that sunday, she didn't like my plan at first but eventually she came round to my fantastic plan, well at least it was for me. We arranged the meetup at seven in the evening in oxford street, We both had to take the tube(train) . I got there first, when I was waiting for her I got a call from a strange number , it was her; sorry I am running late I will be there in 20 minutes "she said", although I waited for one hour. Finally she came and we started talking about where we should go for dinner. After a while we agreed each other to go to a Chinese or Italian restaurant; in the end we chose the Italian one. We were at the restaurant for one and a half hour , eating and talking about many things, he had a portion of Italian cheese, when we had the first bite we looked to each other and said "what the hell is this taste?" We were pretty sure that the cheese had been gone off, so we made a fuss quickly, the ashamed waitress apologised and offered us another portion of cheese for free, so we thought it was fair. Once we finished eating we stood up from our table and saw Jane's grandmother outside, Jane had received a call from her 2 hours ago when we were deciding where to eat, Jane's grandmother saw us and went in to the restaurant making a fuss of Jane, kissing and saying beautiful things about her adorable granddaughter like if she was ten years old, I left them talking about their things and I went straight home because I had to wake up very early the next day. Thank you everyone for correcting this text, Have all a very good day.

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Eating Out

Last week I went to a restaurant in the city center where I currently live, It had been ages since I last ate out.
At first I didn't have anyone to go with so I decided to invite my dear friend Jane. Apart from having dinner we could catch up with each other because I had not seen her for quite a while.
I called and told her about what I felt like doing that Sunday. She didn't like my plan at first but eventually she came around to my fantastic plan, well at least it was for me.
We arranged the meetup at seven in the evening in on Oxford Street, We both had to take the tube(train) . I got there first, and when I was waiting for her I got a call from a strange number. It was her. "Sorry I am running late I will be there in 20 minutes." she said, although I waited for one hour.
Finally she came arrived and we started talking about where we should go for dinner.
After a while we agreed each other to go to a Chinese or Italian restaurant; in the end we chose the Italian one.
We were at the restaurant for an hour and a half one and a half hour , eating and talking about many things. We had a portion of Italian cheese, and when we had the first bite we looked to each other and said "what the hell is this taste?" We were pretty sure that the cheese had gone bad been gone off, so we made a fuss quickly, the ashamed waitress apologized apologised and offered us another portion of cheese for free, so we thought it was fair.
Once we finished eating we stood up from our table and saw Jane's grandmother outside, Jane had received a call from her 2 hours ago/earlier when we were deciding where to eat, Jane's grandmother saw us and came/went in to the restaurant making a fuss of Jane, kissing and saying beautiful things about her adorable granddaughter as if like if she was ten years old, I left them talking about their things and I went straight home because I had to wake up very early the next day.

Thank you everyone for correcting this text, Have all a very good day.


Tu escritura sobre su experiencia en el restaurante fue muy interesante. Tu texto tuvo mucha de la información que hiciera esta historia muy bien. ¡Sigue avanzando! 

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Eating Out

Last week I went to a restaurant in the city center where I currently live. It had been ages since I last ate out.
At first I didn't have anyone to go with so I decided to invite my dear friend Jane. Apart from having dinner we could catch up with each other because I had not seen her for quite a while.
I called and told her about what I felt like doing that Sunday. She didn't like my plan at first but eventually she came around to my fantastic plan -- well at least it was for me. (You are using 'plan' a lot. Maybe you can make this flow a little better by saying 'She didn't like my fantastic plan at first, but eventually she came around.)
We arranged the meetup at seven in the evening in on Oxford Street, We both had to take the tube(train) . I got there first,  and when I was waiting for her I got a call from a strange number. It was her.  "Sorry I am running late I will be there in 20 minutes," she said, although I waited for one hour.
Finally she came arrived and we started talking about where we should go for dinner.
After a while we agreed each other to go to a Chinese or Italian restaurant; in the end we chose the Italian one.
We were at the restaurant for one and a half hours(more common: an hour and a half) , eating and talking about many things. We had a portion of Italian cheese,  and when we had the first bite we looked to each other and said "what the hell is this taste?" We were pretty sure that the cheese had gone bad been gone off, so we made a fuss quickly.  The ashamed(better: embarrassed) waitress apologized and offered us another portion of cheese for free, so we which  we thought it was fair.
Once we finished eating we stood up from our table and saw Jane's grandmother outside. Jane had received a call from her 2 hours ago earlier when we were deciding where to eat. Jane's grandmother saw us and went came in to the restaurant making a fuss of Jane, kissing and saying beautiful things about her adorable granddaughter like if (or: as if) she was ten years old. I left them talking about their things and I went straight home because I had to wake up very early the next day.

Thank you everyone for correcting this text, Have all a very good day.

Good job!  I understood everything you wrote.  You have a good day too!

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