My first essay

I   graduate next month.   I will then go to Australia to study for an  undergraduate degree.  Now ,I really should need to study hard to improve my use of the English language.  Sometimes I feel really happy to be able to study abroad because I think it will be really exciting.  I can meet new people and do some things that I have never done before.  However, othertimes I feel really nervous and even overwhelmed.  This is mainly because my spoken and written English is not as good as it could be.  OR  (my speaking and writing in English is not as good as it could be.  I can't yet speak fluently or express my meanings clearly.  I have decided to write essays there every day.   Maybe I can not only can I improve my English skills but also make some new friends.

My first essay

Great work! The more you write, the better you will get, so keep writing! And enjoy your studies in Australia!

My first essay

Pretty good! There are a few grammatical mistakes here, but your meaning is clear, so don't feel too nervous about your trip to Australia! If you make sure to speak in English to lots of Australians, then you'll be much more fluent after you finish your study.

A note about punctuation for your written English: Full stops and commas are written right next to the word they follow, and there is always a space between the punctuation and the next word. I hope that helps. :-)