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Budda's birthday. Today is Buddha's birthday. In Korea, today is a holiday. I heard that the buddhist has a big portion among religionest. Generally, the olds or women believe the buddhism. Most of temples are located in the deep mountains. Of course, these days, many temples are built in the cities. However it is the special case. Therefore, even though I am an atheist, l like this calm and peaceful mood of the temple. To go there, I can enjoy many excellent sceneries during the driving. I really congratulate his birthday. When I was child, my friends disputed each other about Buddha. Some said that he is a man, others said that he is a woman. Like this, we disputed each other about the sex of Jesus. Frankly speaking, until when I graduated the elementary school, I knew the Jesus is woman. Today is the Buddha's birthday and in the same time, it is my brother's birthday. All famillies can not forget his birthday. It is very lucky for him. The very early this morning, I left a celebration message to him by SNS. Even though, today is the holiday, I will not go to outside for doing some activities due to the fine-dust. It is very severe problem in Korea. The quality of Seoul has the third lank in the world. I bought many masks for my familles. At night, there are some march on the streets with lightening to celebrate Buddha's birthday. The very strange point is that the Buddha's birth day is different by each countries. On the other hand, the birthday of Jesus is same for all countries. Anyway, I am very happy not to work today.

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Today is Buddha's birthday. In Korea, today is a holiday. I heard that the buddhist Buddhism has a big portion among of religionest. religious followers. Generally, the olds people or women believe the in buddhism. Most of temples are located in the deep mountains. Of course, these days, many temples are built in the cities. However it is the a special case. Therefore, even though I am an atheist, l like this the calm and peaceful mood of the temple. To When I go there, I can enjoy many excellent sceneries during the drive driving. I really congratulate his birthday. When I was a child, my friends disputed with each other about Buddha. Some said that he is was a man, others said that he is was a woman. Like this, we disputed with each other about the sex of Jesus. Frankly speaking, until when I graduated the elementary school, I knew the thought that Jesus is was a woman. 

Today is the Buddha's birthday and in at the same time, it is my brother's birthday. All the family cannot forget his birthday. It is very lucky for him. The very early this morning, I left a celebration message to for him by SNS.
Even though, today is the a holiday, I will not go to outside for doing to do some activities due to the fine-dust. It is very severe problem in Korea. The quality of Seoul has is the third lank worst(just guessing your meaning here) in the world. I bought many masks for my familles family.
At night, there are some march parades on in the streets with lightening lights to celebrate Buddha's birthday.
The very strange point is that the Buddha's birthday is different by for each countries country. On the other hand, the birthday of Jesus is the same for all countries. Anyway, I am very happy not to work today.

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