Just need a correction if these sentences are wrong
Hello, everyone!
Could you please correct these phrases?
Let's take a walk to the photo center. We need to make photos for visa. We are going to the sea this Saturday.
When we walk outside come along (next to me)
(my daughter is only 20 months old and I want her to walk next to me, because it is quite dangerouse on the street; I'm affraid she can run to the road, so I want to create this rule for us, but I don't know how I can say it correctly)
Don't go/run very far from me!
There is a road. Let's cross the road together. You have to hold my hand when we cross the road So give me your hand and look both sides. There are no cars nearby, so we can cross over.
Stop! Let's wait till this car go by.
It went away, so we can go.
There are traffic lights on this road. Press this button and wait for the green light. Then we can go/cross the road.
It's green! Let's go!
We did it! We crossed the road.
Now, let's run! Run after me!
Oops! The path is wet here. Don't run. It's dangerouse to run on the wet surface, because you can fall and hit yourself.
There are kittens! They are basking in the sun/sunshine!
Thank you for attention!
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Just need a correction if these sentences are wrong
Hello, everyone!Could you please correct these phrases?
Let's take a walk to the photo center. We need photos for a visa. We are going to the sea this Saturday.
When we walk outside walk next to me
(my daughter is only 20 months old and I want her to walk next to me, because it is quite dangerous on the street; I'm afraid she will run onto the road, so I want to create this rule for us, but I don't know how I can say it correctly)
Don't go/run too far from me! Stay close!
There is a road. Let's cross the road together. You have to hold my hand when we cross the road So give me your hand and look both ways. There are no cars coming so we can cross over.
Stop! Let's wait for this car to go past
It's gone, so we can go.
There are traffic lights on this road. Press this button and wait for the green light. Then we can go/cross the road.
It's green! Let's go!
We did it! We crossed the road.
Now, let's run! Run after me! (Or chase me!)
Oops! The path is wet here. Don't run. It's dangerouse to run on the wet surface because you can fall and hurt yourself.
There are kittens! They are basking in the sun/sunshine!
Thank you for attention!
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