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I am so happy today! In the morning, I had photography classes, I like and appreciate my photography teacher even though his class is so boring that it makes me sleepy. After my classes, I enjoyed a bowl of delicious cold noodles with my friend. And in the afternoon, my aunt came to the campus of my university and brought the book back to me, which was lost in her home because of my carelessness. I thanked my aunt a lot because what she did couldn't warm me more in the hot summer. Then I spent the rest of the afternoon reading some books related to my major and learning English. Later, when it was dusk, I had yoga class with my roommate. When I finished my studying after yoga class, I went back to my dorm as it was the end of the night. I saw the stars sparkling in the dark sky, heard the noise of a passing airplane and smelled the fragrance of the blooming roses, all of which made me happy. Sometimes, having a good mood is so easy: even writing such a childish diary to record my life also gave me lots of pleasure.

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I am so happy today!

In the morning, I had photography class. I like and appreciate my photography teacher even though his class is so boring that it makes me sleepy. After class, I enjoyed a bowl of delicious cold noodles with my friend. And in the afternoon, my aunt came to the campus of my university and brought my book back to me, which was lost in her home because of my carelessness. I thanked my aunt a lot because all that she did couldn't warm me more in the hot summer. And then I spent the rest of the afternoon reading some books related to my major and learning English. Later, when it was dusk, I had yoga class with my roommate. When I finished studying after my yoga class and went back to my dorm, it was the end of the night. I saw the stars sparkling in the dark sky, heard the noise of a passing airplane and smelled the fragrance of the blooming roses, all of which made me happy. 
Sometimes, having a good mood is so easy: even writing such a childish diary entry to record my life also gave me lots of pleasure.


Hi Willow,

    This is a beautiful entry. I change just a few things. Let me know if you have any questions.

All the best,

Julie

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((Great writing! A few small edits. Main thing to be wary of is run-on sentences (like the first sentence), which can be tricky. Hope this helps!))

I am so happy today!

In the morning, I had photography classes. I like and appreciate my photography teacher even though his class is so boring that it makes me sleepy. After my classes, I enjoyed a bowl of delicious cold noodles with my friend. and in the afternoon, my aunt came to the campus of my university and sent gave the my book back to me, which was lost in her home because of my carelessness. I thanked my aunt a lot because all she did couldn't warm me more in the hot summer. And Then, I spent the rest of the afternoon reading some books related to my major and learning English. Later, it was dusk time, in the evening I had yoga class with my roommate. When I finished my studying after my yoga class and went back to my dorm, it was the end of the night. I saw the stars sparkling in the dark sky, heard the noise of the passed airplanes passing overhead, and smelled the fragrance of the blooming roses; all of those this made me happy.
Sometimes, having a good mood is so easy: even writing such a childish diary to record my life also gave me lots of pleasure.
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I am so happy today!

In the morning, I had photography classes, I like and appreciate my photography teacher even though his class is so boring that it makes me sleepy. After classes, I enjoyed a bowl of delicious cold noodles with my friend. And in the afternoon, my aunt came to the campus of my university and sent the book back to me, which was lost in her home because of my carelessness. I thanked my aunt a lot because what she did made me very happy.all she did couldn't warm me more in the hot summer. And Then I spent the rest of the afternoon reading some books related to my major and learning English. Later, it was dusk time, and I had yoga class with my roommate. When I finished my studying after my yoga class, I and went back to my dorm as it was the end of the night. I saw the stars sparkling in the dark sky, heard the noise of the passing airplane and smelled the fragrance of the blooming roses, all of those which made me happy.
Sometimes, having a good mood is so easy: even writing such childish things in my diary to record my life and also gave giving me lots of pleasure.
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I am so happy today!

In the Earlier this morning, I went for my had photography class. I like and appreciate my photography teacher and appreciate all the help he has given us, even though his class is so boring that it makes me sleepy. After all the classes for the morning, I enjoyed a bowl of delicious cold noodles with my friend. And Later, in the afternoon, my aunt dropped by at my the campus of my university and to return to me brought the book that I had so carelessly left behind in her house. back to me, which was lost in her home because of my carelessness. I thanked my aunt profusely, a lot because what she did couldn' had warmed my heart  me -- 'much more than the warmth one would feel in a hot summer'. Then After she left, I spent the rest of the afternoon reading some books related to my major and learning English. Later, when it was dusk came, and I had yoga class with my roommate. When I finished my studying After my yoga class, I continued with my studies, after which I went back to my dorm, as it was already very late at the end of the night. On my walk back, I saw the stars sparkling in the dark sky, heard the noise of a passing airplane and smelled the fragrance of the blooming roses, all of which made me happy.
Sometimes, getting yourself into a good mood is so easy,  for even the writing of such a childish diary entry to record an uneventful day of my life can  give me so much lots of pleasure.

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