I am a traditional person but```
I am not an Apple fans,but I always use it,because I am used to it。Now everyone are waitting for Iphone 8 but I am still using iPhone 4s。I do not wanna spend too much time on my phone cuz I am a traditional person。But there is a bad point。 When my friend has downloaded a lot of interesting app , I was looking for wifi signal。 In China everybody likes Used to pay by mobile phone ,but my phone is very slowly。 I was wasted a lot of time for waiting。 So I decided to buy a new cell phone now。hope next time when writting my new compositiI already have a new phone。 I think Iphone 6s for me is enough。 what do you think:)?
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I am a traditional person but```
I am not an Apple fans,but I always use it,because I am used to it have to use。Now everyone are waitting for Iphone 8 but I am still using iPhone 4s。I do not wanna spend too much time on my phone cuz I am a traditional person。But there is a bad point。 When While my friend has downloaded is dowdloading a lot of interesting apps , I am was looking for wifi signal。 In China everybody likes Used to pay by using mobile phone to pay the bill,but my phone is very slowly。 I was wasted a lot of time for waiting。 So I decided to buy a new cell phone now。i hope next time when writting my new compositiI, i already have a new phone。 I think Iphone 6s is good enough for me that's enough。 what do you think:)?0
I am a traditional person but```
I am not an Apple fans,but I always use it,because I am used to it。Now everyone are is waiting for the Iphone 8 but I am still using the iPhone 4s。I do not wanna spend too much time on my phone cuz I am a traditional person。But there is a bad point。 When my friend has downloaded a lot of interesting apps , I was looking for a wifi signal。 In China everybody likes Used to pay by mobile phone ,but my phone is very slowly。 I was wasted a lot of time for waiting。 So I decided to buy a new cell phone now。I hope next time when writing my new compositiI entry I already have a new phone。 I think the Iphone 6s is for me that's enough for me。 what do you think:)?Want to progress faster?
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