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Commenting on one of the Albert Einstein’s remarks As is known to all, Albert Einstein once said that” I have no special talents. I am only passionately curious.” , which emphasizes that curiosity is the key factor of achieving success. In my opinion, it is curiosity that ignites passion which motivates initially to explore everything you want to reach success. Examples are not far to seek and the typical one is Edison. Edison was interested in everything since his childhood, while could not understand something, he always wanted to figure them out. Once when he saw a wild honeycomb beside the garden fence, which made him feel so strange that he used a stick to fiddle with to see what happened. He didn’t give up even being sting up by wild bees, until he saw the structure of the honeycomb clearly. As we can see above, curiosity is of great significance which plays a vital role in the process of great achievements. Without intense curiosity , one cannot persist for long to keep going either in study or career. Only when we keep it from now on, can we stick to our goal and arouse our potentials to achieve success like a talent.

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((Good work here! A few minor edits from me. Hope these help! ))
Commenting on one of the Albert Einstein’s remarks

As is known to all many people know(1), Albert Einstein once said, that ”I have no special talents. I am only passionately curious,” which emphasizes that curiosity is the key factor of in achieving success.
In my opinion, it is curiosity that ignites the passion which motivates many to initially to explore, everything you want to reach success.
Examples are not far to seek difficult to find, and the typical one is Edison. Edison was interested in everything since his childhood. , while When he could not understand something, he always wanted to figure them it out. Once, when he saw a wild honeycomb beside the garden fence, which it made him feel so strange (curious?) that he used a stick to fiddle with it to see what happened. He didn’t give up, even after being sting up stung by wild bees - not until he saw the structure of the honeycomb clearly.
As we can see above, curiosity is of great significance which and plays a vital role in the process of making great achievements. Without intense curiosity, one cannot persist for long to keep going either in study or career. Only when we maintain curiosity keep it from now on, can we stick adhere to our goals and arouse our potentials to achieve success like a talent.

(1) I recommend this phrasing, as not necessarily everyone knows what Einstein has said. I actually never heard this quote! =P

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