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JUST A DIARY ON May.2th (Writing about drying the Futon outside) I would like someone to correct my diary. Could you do that for me, please? JUST A DIARY ON May.2th Recentrly, When I try to write daily notebook entry down here, I don't have any idea to write since i can't come up with something to write down in notebook enries. However, I always get some idea to write here when I least expect, for example taking a walk, enjoying the music and working out. That's how, I did come up with an idea also today. Well, I make it a rule to hang out Futon outside in the sun when it's fine weather like sunny or patly clowd. I hear from the internet that it's such a good thing to do it everyday. The internet says that it might effect what this doing make it clean, what it make you take a good sleap when having sleep with the futon dried outside in sunny. Oh yeah, when I was a child, also I usually hear it from my mom so many times that I feel it noisy. But when It would bad weather like heavy rain or so thick clowds that it can rain soon, I shouldn not do dry a futon outside, or I might forget doing it. So, it should be difficult for me to hang out a futon or some loundry outside everyday. But I have been trying to do it difinately when it's fine outside. You know, this doing it make the futon so crean that without bacteria at all lol

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((Hello! Good job here - I have some corrections and suggestions to offer. I hope it helps! Feel free to ask for clarifications (character limit is difficult))

Recentrly, Wwhen I try to write a daily notebook entry down here, I don't have any ideas to write since i I can't come up with something to write down in notebook enries entries. However, I always get some ideas to write here when I least expect, for example while taking a walk, enjoying the music and working out. That's how, I also did come  came up with an idea today. Well, I make it a rule to hang out my futon outside in the sun when it's fine nice weather, like sunny or partly clowd cloudy. I hear from on the internet ((alternate option: "I hear from people on the internet")) that it's such a good thing to do it every day. Oh yeah, when I was a child, also I also usually heard it from my mom so many times that I feel it noisy((Not sure we have a phrase in English that means exactly this... perhaps "I heard it so many times it was like background noise" or "it was like white noise")). But when it would be bad weather like heavy rain or so  such thick clowds  clouds that it can  might rain soon, I shouldn not do dry a futon outside, or I might forget doing it ((you mean forget the futon outside, yes?)). So, it should would be difficult for me to hang out a futon or some loundry laundry outside every day, but I have definitely been trying to do it difinately when it's fine nice outside. You know, this doing it this makes the futon so clean that without bacteria at all lol it's completely free of bacteria.

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Recently, when I try to write a daily notebook entry down here, I don't have any ideas to write since I can't come up with something to write down in notebook entries. However, I always get some ideas to write here when I least expect, for example while taking a walk, enjoying the music and working out. That's how, I also did came up with a idea today. Well, I make it a rule to hang out my futon outside in the sun when it's nice weather, like sunny or partly cloudy. I hear from people on the internet that it's such a good thing to do it everyday. Oh yeah, when I was a child, I also usually heard it from my mom so many times. But when it would be bad weather like heavy rain or such thick clouds that it can might rain soon, I shouldn't do dry a futon outside, or I might forget doing it. So, it would be difficult for me to hang out a futon or some laundry outside every day, but I have definitely been trying to do it when it's nice outside. You know, doing this makes the futon so clean that without bacteria at all lol it's completely free of bacteria.

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