Internet (Could somebody correct it. Thank you)
Nowdays Internet is used by all people, because, in my opinion it is very user-friendly even by old people. For example, in my case, I usually spend a lot of time browsing different types of websites as travels, music, news etc...
Currently I am studying a degree and internet is doing very useful for me because I can access to my class online and then I can see my clasifications online too.
On the other hand, we could talk about the danger of internet and above all the security. We must have care with our personal dates because there are a lot of danger in the network and a lot of people who want do ilegal things.
To sum up, internet is very useful but very danger too. We must acces without afraid but with very care.
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The Internet (Could somebody correct it this, please? Thank you)
Nowdays, the Internet is used by all sorts of people, even old people, because it is so user-friendly.because, in my opinion it is very user-friendly even by old people. For example, in my case, I usually spend a lot of time browsing different types of travel, music and news web sites. as travels, music, news etc...Currently, I am studying to get a degree. and The Internet is doing very useful for me because I can access to my class online and then I can see check my clasifications grades online, too.
On the other hand, though, we could talk about the dangers of the Internet, and above all the for example, its lack of security. We must have take great care with of our personal dates information because there are a lot of dangerous in the network and a lot of people out there who want to do illegal things.
To sum up, the Internet is very useful, but very dangerous, too. However, we don't have to be afraid when accessing it. without afraid but We just need to take extra with very care.
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The Internet
Nowadays, the Internet is used by all sorts of people, because in my opinion, it is very user-friendly—even for older people. For example, in my case, I spend a lot of time browsing different types of websites such as ones about travel, music, news, etc.Currently, I am studying for a degree, and the Internet is very useful because I can access my class online and I can see my clasifications (I'm not sure what you mean by "classifications" here) online too.
On the other hand, we could talk about the dangers of the Internet and above all, the issues with online security. We must take care of our personal data because there are a lot of security threats within networks and a lot of people who want do illegal things.
To sum up, the Internet is very useful but very dangerous too. We must access it without being afraid but also with great care.
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