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I just made stylistic changes to improve the flow and make it sounds natural :) Hope you like it!
Then, I just decided all the bad can go to hell!
I can meet up with my friends, walk everywhere, do everything I really love to do. We only have one life. We don't have to spend it on tears and sadness.
I wish for you happy emotions, an excellent mood, sweet lovers, a lot of inspiration and good news!
Be happy!
There is a lot that is open to interpretation and feeling, but here is one example of some minor corrections. Thanks for sharing!
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Today I walked outside and breathed the fresh air, received the warmth of the sun, watched the ducks in a lake, but felt sadness in my personal life.
Then, I just decided to send everything bad straight to hell!
I can meet with my friends, walk everywhere I need to go, and do all of the things that I really love to do. This life is our only one. We don't need to spend it in tears while being sad.
I wish upon you bright emotions, an excellent mood, sweet lovers, a lot of inspiration, and good news!
Be happy!
Good decision)
Today, walking around of my house i breathed fresh air, got warm under the sun, looked at the ducks in a lake and felt sadness of my personal live.Than i just decided to send everything bad to hell!
I can meet with my friends, walking everywhere, do all that i really love. The life is one. We don't have to spend it for tears and sad.
I wish you bright emotions, exellent mood, sweet lovers, much inspiration and good news!
Be happy!
Today, I have walked around my house; I have breathed the fresh air; I have got warmed under the sun; I have watched the ducks in a lake, yet I have also felt sadness in my personal life.
Then, I decided to tell myself to hell with everything!
* To hell with someone/something> I do not care about someone or something.
I can meet with my friends, walk anywhere I like and do anything I want. Because we just have one life to live. We don't have to spend it in tears and sadness. I just hope for a life of happiness and excitement -- one which also gives me much love, inspiration and good news!
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