Yesterday (Please help me correct my horrible writting)
It was at 6 am when i got up in the morning .It was so early that other three roomates were still in bed .Having not went to the memorial tower for several months, i took a walk to get there .Seeing the green trees and high mountains and breathing fresh air ,i felt very pleasant.I believe that sleeping early and waking up ealy is good to my health.After walking for a while ,I decided to take photos to record this beautiful scene to motive me to get up early in the morning .Finally, i picked two pictures i am satisfied to be saved and delete the other photoes. At that moment , i felt a little bit hungry ,and the cold wind made it more intense.So i went back to my dorm and bought my breakfast halfway.After my breakfast ,i started washing my clothes and hung them outside .Next, i went to the playground when the sun was high in the sky .My shoulder hurts because i always seat myself on the chair for a long time .Maybe i need to do more body exercise.I found there were some professional players from Africa running on the playground . I seated quietly watching them running around by around,who sweated a lot .
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Yesterday (Please help me correct my horrible writing)
It was at 6 am when I got up yesterday morning. It was so early that my other three roomates were still in bed. Having not gone to the memorial tower for several months, I took a walk to get there. Seeing the green trees and high mountains and breathing fresh air, I felt very pleasant. I believe that going to sleep early and waking up early is good for my health. After walking for a while, I decided to take photos of this beautiful scene to motivate me to get up early in the morning. Finally, I picked two pictures I was satisfied with, to be saved them and deleted the others. At that moment, I felt a little bit hungry and the cold wind made the hunger more intense. So I went back to my dorm, and buying my breakfast on the way. After my breakfast, I started washed my clothes and hung them outside. Next, I went to the playground as the sun was high in the sky. My shoulder hurts because I had been seated myself on the chair for a long time. Maybe I need to do more body exercises. I found there were some professional football players from Africa running on the playground. I sat quietly, watching them run around. They sweated a lot.Want to progress faster?
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