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Hi guys! I'd like to improve my English. Could you correct my text please?? It is said that sleeping is the best thing in the world. Although I agree with them, I must say that I can’t get sleep very well. I suffer from insomnia. Even if I’m sleepy, every time I lie on the bed my heart starts beating very fast and my brain starts over thinking, so I start to count the sheeps who climb a little wall but it doesn’t usually work. Then I start thinking to how many hours I need to sleep until the alarm clocks and I get nervous because I can’t get sleep enough hours. The result is that I find myself with big bags under my eyes in the morning.

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Hi guys! I'd like to improve my English. Could you correct my text please??

It is said that sleeping is one of the best things in the world. Although I agree with them, I must say that I can’t get enough sleep very well because I suffer from insomnia. Even if I’m sleepy, every time I lie on the bed my heart starts beating very fast and my brain starts over thinking - so I start to count the sheeps who that climb a little wall, but it that doesn’t usually work very well. Then I start thinking to about how many hours I need to sleep until before the alarm clocks rings and I get nervous because I can’t get sleep enough hours. The result is that I find myself with big bags under my eyes in the morning.

It is said that sleeping is one of the best things in the world. Although I agree with them, I must say that I can’t get enough sleep because I suffer from insomnia. Even when I’m sleepy, every time I lie on the bed, my heart starts beating very fast and my brain starts over thinking - so I start to count sheep that climb a little wall, but that doesn’t usually work very well. Then I start thinking about how many hours I need to sleep before the alarm clock rings and I get nervous because I can’t sleep enough hours. The result is that I find myself with big bags under my eyes in the morning.

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Hi guys! I'd like to improve my English. Could you correct my text please??

It is said that sleeping is one of the best things in the world. Although I agree with them, I must say that I just can’t get enough sleep since I suffer from insomnia. Even if I’m sleepy, every time I lie on the bed my heart starts beating very fast and my brain starts over thinking. So I start to counting the sheep but it doesn’t usually work. Then I start thinking about how many hours of sleep I need until the alarm clocks rings and I get nervous because I won’t get enough hours of sleep. The result is that I find myself with big bags under my eyes in the morning.

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