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Tiffany Lin
Casually writing about my cat. Hi, everyone, I am Tiffany and raise an England shortcut blue cat with me. My cat is adorable and every time I pat him, he purrs loudly. He likes to jump to my bed and messes up there with so much fur falling from his body. He is raised up at home so he is afraid of going outside, that's why I always call him coward.

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Casually writing about my cat.

Hi, everyone. I am Tiffany and I raise an England shortcut blue cat. My cat is adorable and every time I pat him, he purrs loudly. He likes to jump on my bed and mess it up with so much fur falling from his body. He is raised at home so he is afraid of going outside, that's why I always call him coward.
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Casually writing about my cat.

Hi, everyone, I am Tiffany and raise ( I have) an England ish shortcut hair blue cat with me. My cat is adorable and every time I pat him, he purrs loudly. He likes to jump to onmy bed and messes up there plays around with so much fur falling from his body. He is was raised up at home so he is afraid of going outside, that's why I always call him coward.
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 Hi everyone. I am Tiffany and I raise an English shortcut blue cat.   My cat is adorable and every time I pet him he purrs  loudly. He likes to jump onto my bed and mess it up by shedding his fur on it. He was raised as an indoor cat and is afraid to go outside. That is why I call him a coward .

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Casually writing about my cat.

Hi, everyone. I am Tiffany and I raise an England shortcut blue cat with me. My cat is adorable and every time I pat him, he purrs loudly. He likes to jump on and mess up my bed and messes up there with so much  as a lot of fur falls from his body. He is raised up at home so he is afraid of going outside. This is why I always call him a coward.

Hi Yiting,

A good piece of writing. I only made minor changes for you.

Cheers, 

Lance

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