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Four wizards A old man was walking at home, and he saw four ducks in the water, they was taking a bath. The old men wondered about that show, he say - it's so curious, I never saw four ducks, one hug the other with its wings and kiss with its peak. The old man walked toward them, and he louded "who are you?" in this moment the ducks becamed in wind and the day sunny and clear change begin rain and the old man impressed quickly ran at home and never saw one duck in her life.

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Four wizards

A old man was walking home, and he saw four ducks in the water. They were taking a bath. The old man wondered about what he saw and he said, "it's so curious, I have never seen four ducks, one hug the other with its wings and kiss with its beak. The old man walked toward them, and he asked "who are you?". At this moment the ducks became a wind and the clear sunny sky began to change and started to rain and the old man was so impressed. He quickly ran home and never saw a duck in her life.


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Four wizards

An old man was walking at home , and he saw four ducks in the water. They were taking a bath. > An old man saw 4 ducks taking a bath in a pond while he was on his way home. ( Better form)

The old men wondered about that show, he say - it's so curious, I never saw four ducks, one hug the other with its wings and kiss with its peak.

> The old man was surprised by what he saw, because one of the ducks was embracing another duck with its wings and kissing the other duck with its beak.


The old man walked toward them, and he louded "who are you?"> The old man  walked  towards them and  asked out loud, " What are you?"

in this moment the ducks becamed in wind and the day sunny and clear change begin rain ?? and the old man impressed quickly ran at home and never saw one duck in her life>

> At that moment, the ducks suddenly disappeared and transformed themselves into a gush of wind. Soon the sunny and clear day changed as it began to rain . Impressed but shocked by what he had witnessed, the old man ran home as quickly as he could, for he had never seen a duck like those in his life.

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