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Practicing my English 7 I wrote some sentences in order to practise new words and improving my writing skills. -I'had been saving some money to buy a shirt until a robber stole me. Inspite of that, eventually I got it. -He still must go to the college. -Where do you are? I've already started to clean up my flat. -He is a smart guy. I've been perking him up to don't give up. -I dropped by my grandma's after a long time. She almost died in hapiness at see me. -When we arrived in we get in the house. I spoke loudly if anybody was in there. -Mark passed over the topic that Mary most wanted to discuss. ------------------ Thank you for reading this. If I made a mistake please correct it. This will help me to get better.

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Practicing my English 7

I wrote some sentences in order to practise new words and improve my writing skills.

-I had been saving some money to buy a shirt until a robber stole money from me. In spite of that, eventually, I got it back.
-He must still go to the college.
-Where are you? I've already started to clean up my flat.
-He is a smart guy. I've been encouraging him to not give up
-I dropped by my grandma's after a long time. She almost died of happiness in seeing me
-When we arrived, we entered the house. I spoke loudly to see if anybody was in there.
-Mark passed over the topic that Mary most wanted to discuss.
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Thank you for reading this. If I made a mistake please correct it.

This will help me to get better.

This is a great effort, but quite a lot of errors. The main thing however is that it is clear in every sentence what you want to say! My motto is communication first, perfection second!

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