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Dear Mia,
Yesterday I got your letter with invitation on the special party of April, 27. Unfortunately, I won`t be able to come. I am very ill and must to be in a hospital about 5 days yet. However, if you will be able to carry a party on 3-5 days I will be very happy! You we will be all to make a lot of fun on your party and I too. I hope that you will be able to carry a party but if I were you I asked other friends whether they will be to visit a party in 3-5 days.
Mia, do you remember our plan of evening-parties? Do can you use it for this party? It would be wonderful!
I am waiting for your answer.
Best wishes, your friend Marya.
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Dear Mia,Yesterday I got your letter with an invitation to the special party on April, 27th (I think you could use "27" or "27th," really. Unfortunately, I won`t be able to come. I am very ill and must to be in a hospital about another 5 days yet. However, if you will be able to carry postpone the a party on by 3-5 days I will be very happy! You We will be all to make have a lot of fun at your party and I too. I hope that you will be able to carry a party but, if I were you, I asked would ask other friends whether they will be to visit a able to go to a party in 3-5 days.
Mia, do you remember our plan of evening- parties? Can you use it for this party? It would be wonderful!
I am waiting for your answer.
Best wishes, your friend Marya.
It is farily minor and hardly noticeable, but there is a difference between a back tick (`) and an apostrophe ('). Honestly, I'm not even sure when a back tick is used, other than in certain programming situations (i.e. writing code). For possession and contractions, you should use apostrophe (e.g. won't, Sam's).
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