Why should I became a better person ? (PLEASE CORRECT ME)
Every day when I am going to work I usually to ready some news about the political, or about the economy and not rarely about the cotidian life. In a country with many problems like mine now a days that got me thinking How can I be better and feel me better despite those bad news ?
Be a better person to my friends to my family be a better person with stranges on the street, because I believe that is impossible to make a change in any country our city our even a community if the change doesn't start with the people.
So I'm trying now make good things every moment of my life, giving good examples to my family, my friends and with shorts acts make a big difference. See, I think that the simple fact of help someone if you are able to do can make the life better. Good things cames before another good things .
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Hey Anderson, check out my correction and a slightly rephrased version as well, below. Well done, keep practicing and having fun!
And be careful with your punctuation. No spaces before full stops.
Why should I became become a better person? (PLEASE CORRECT ME)
Every day when I am going to work I usually to ready read some news about the politicalpolitics, or about the economy or and not rarely about the cotidian often, everyday life. In a country with many problems like mine now a days like mine, which nowadays has many problems,that it got me thinking: how can I be better and feel me better despite those all the bad news?I must be a better person to my friends and to my family, and even with stranges to strangers on the street, because I believe that is impossible to make a change in any country our or city our or even a community if the change doesn't start with the people.
So I'm trying now make to do good things every moment of my life, giving setting good examples to for my family, my friends and with shorts small acts, to make a big difference. See, I think that the simple fact of help helping someone if you are able to do can make the life better. Good things cames before another are followed by more good things.
Every day on the way to work, I find myself reading about politics, the economy, and more often than not, everyday life. I live in a country which seems to have more and more problems every day, and this got me thinking: how can I be better, and feel better, despite the constant bad news?
I reasoned that I must try to be a better person to my friends and my family. Not only that, but I must also be a better person to strangers on the street. If we can improve ourselves, then we can improve our community. Together, our community can improve our city, and ultimately our country.
So I'm trying to live by these words and to do good deeds every day of my life, setting fine examples for my family and my friends. For with small acts, we can make a big difference. See, I think that the simple fact of helping someone if you are able can make all our lives better. And then only more good things lie in wait.
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