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Over the moon Last time I was over the moon was the baptism for my nephew. I liked it because was an occasion where my family was together. My parents were very happy. My uncle and his wife and daughter came from A Coruña the Saturday. They stayed in my home, and We fun a lot with them. It is a pity because normally they don´t come to Madrid. We always stay together in holidays in Galicia. In my grandparents home. The house is very big, so we are about 12 people in the house and it is very funny.. although cooking and washing the dishes it isn`t so funny. Thanks!

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Over the moon

Last time I was over the moon was the baptism for of my nephew. I liked it because it was an occasion where my family was together. My parents were very happy. My uncle, his wife and their daughter came from A Coruña the on a Saturday. They stayed in my home, and we had great fun a lot with them. It is a pity because normally that they don´t come to Madrid. We always stay together in my grandparents' home in holidays in Galicia during the holidays. In my grandparents home. The house is very big, so we and there are about 12 people in the house and we all had fun. it is very funny.. although However, cooking and washing the dishes were not so fun.  it isn`t so funny.

Thanks!

Hi Araceli, 

I could tell from your writing that you were over the moon indeed! Just a little suggestion: "Funny" is an adjective we use to describe a person, thing or event which we find humorous. Something that is funny is hilarious and makes us laugh. Something that is "fun" can also make us smile and laugh; however, it is because we find it enjoyable or amusing.

Hope this helps! 

Cheers, Lance

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Over the moon

Last time I was over the moon was the baptism for of my nephew. I liked it because it was an occasion where my family was together. My parents were very happy. My uncle and his wife and daughter came from A Coruña on the Saturday. They stayed in my home, and we fun had a lot of fun with them. It is a pity because normally they don´t come to Madrid. We always stay together in on holidays in Galicia, in my grandparents home. The house is very big, so we there are about 12 people in the house and it is very funny great fun.. although cooking and washing the dishes it isn`t so funny.

Good job Araceli! My corrections are in red and my suggestions to sound more natural are in blue and grey.
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Over the moon

Last time I was over the moon was due to the baptism for of my nephew.  I liked it because was an occasion where my family was together.  My parents were very happy.  My uncle and his wife and daughter came from A Coruña the on Saturday.  (or that Saturday. or the Saturday before the baptism. DEPENDING WHAT DAY THE BAPTISM WAS HELD)  They stayed in my home, and We we fun had a lot of fun with them.  It is a pity because normally they don´t come to Madrid more often.  We always stay together in for holidays in Galicia in my grandparents home.   Their house is very big.   so we are About 12 Twelve people family members get together in the house and it is very funny cheerful and enjoyable.    However, cooking and washing the dishes for so many is not so funny ..


Thanks!

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Over the moon

Last time I was over the moon was the baptism for of my nephew. I liked it because it was an occasion where my family was together. My parents were very happy. My uncle and his wife and daughter came from A Coruña the on Saturday. They stayed in my home and we had fun a lot of fun with them. It is a pity because normally they don´t come to Madrid. We always get stay together during in holidays in Galicia. In My grandparents home The house is very big, so as we are about 12 people in the house and it is very funny.. although cooking and washing the dishes it isn`t so funny.

Thanks!


Well done, only a few minor errors. I have responded to your message, as I only saw it now after so long. Hope to hear from you soon =)

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Over the moon

The last time (that) I was over the moon was the baptism of my nephew. I liked it because it was an occasion for where all of my family members was to gather together. My parents were very happy. My uncle, and his wife and their daughter came from A Coruña that Saturday. They stayed in my house home, and we had a lot of fun together a lot with them. It is a pity because normally they  rarely don´t come to Madrid. We always stay together with them during our  in holidays in Galicia. in my grandparents home in Galicia. The house is very big, so there would be we are about 12 of us people staying in the house, and we would have a great time there, .it is very funny.. although the cooking and washing of the dishes were no fun at all. it isn`t so funny.

Thanks!

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