I usually visit a village in summer.
I usually visit a village in summer. There is a tranquil atmosphere and clean air there. You can see a lot of flowers in the fields there. There are many things, which you can do in the village. You can go to the forest to pick up mushrooms and berries. You can work in the garden and go fishing. In the evening you can enjoy a sunset, it's a time when everything gets a gold hue. Now it's spring and in some days you can go to walk to the forest and see how lily of the valley grows.
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I usually visit a village in summer.
I usually visit a village in summer. There is a tranquil atmosphere and clean air there. You can see a lot of flowers in the fields there. There are many things which that you can do in the village. You can go to the forest to pick up mushrooms and berries, and you can work in the garden and go fishing. In the evening you can enjoy a sunset; it's a time when everything gets a gold hue.* Now it's spring and in on some days you can go to walk to the forest and see how the lily of the valley grows* This could also be two separate sentences. "In the evening you can enjoy a sunset. It's a time when everything gets a gold hue." But it is better with a semicolon; this shows that the two independent thoughts are closely related.
Very good! This is very evocative, and I would very much like to visit this village myself.
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