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People who cause their own illnesses should have to pay more for health care. Are you agree? In my opinion, health care is a much wide concept that involves not only lifestyles or diets, but also prevention, education and public politics. For example, it could be a person who is having a diet high in carbohydrates and fats because he/she does not know that it is bad for his/her health, or because of that person could not afford the spending of buy vegetables, fruits and meat. In that case, it will be really difficult to cook healthier. I think it is a political responsibility to care for their citizens and to negotiate with supermarkets and producers a better price of the products that there are selling to the consumers. On the other hand, lifestyles are also a consequence of education system. For instance, if people are sedentary, it could be due to ignorance. Because they have never learned how important it is for maintain a healthy body to practice any sport or to do physic exercises at least day by day. To summarise, I do not agree with the postulate that says that people who have unhealthy habits must pay more for health care. I think that it should not be like this, because of it does not depend entirely on them.

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People who cause their own illnesses should have to pay more for health care. Do you agree?

In my opinion health is a large concept that involves not only lifestyles and diets but also prevention, education and public politics. For example, a person who has a diet high in carbohydrates and fats might not know that it is bad for their health or because they could not afford to buy vegetables, fruits and meat. In that case, it would be a lot more difficult to cook healthier meals.
I think it is a political responsibility to care for citizens and to negotiate with supermarkets and producers for a better price of the products that there are selling to their consumers.
On the other hand, lifestyles can also be a consequence of the education system. For instance if people are sedentary it could be due to ignorance because they never learned how important it is to maintain a healthy body and to practice sport or do physical exercises at least every other day.
To summarise, I do not agree with the postulate that says that people who have unhealthy habits must pay more for health care, I think that it should not be like this, because it does not take all aspects of the individual into account.

This is really great! only a few small mistakes, keep it up! :)

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