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Online shopping Hi, good afternoon! I copy here a writing I did for english class in this morning so that you can correct my mistakes. Thanks! :) "The goal of this report is to evaluate the different options people have to be able to buy products in the easiest and effective way for them. It's possible to go to a shop directly, but since some years ago after being created the Internet, people can online shopping too. In fact, they do it massively there. It's a faster way, no doubt about that, but is it better? Online shopping is by far the faster and comfortable way to buy some kinds of products. You can see photos and the whole description of the product on the seller's website and they can even take you the product home. That sounds so interesting! To be able to buy a product with just some "clicks" is a revolution, specially useful for specialised products and technological devices you couldn't find near home. As disadvantages, the main one would be how to give back a defective product because you don't know the seller and the process could be too long. In addition to this, as for clothes, how could you buy some clothes if you haven't tried them before? It's highly likely clothes don't fit proper! For alimentation products is desirable to check the expiry date before buying something. In short, nothing is perfect and the best option could be to combine this 2 different ways to buy products according to your needs depending on the kind of product, not focusing just on one of them. It's sometimes better to take your time before buying, otherwise you could waste your money."

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Online shopping

Hi, good afternoon! I copied a paper here I wrote for english class in this morning so that you can correct my mistakes. Thanks! :)

"The goal of this report is to evaluate the different options people have to be able to buy products in the easiest and most effective way for them. It's possible to go to a shop in person, but since  being created some years ago,  after the Internet allows people to do online shopping too. In fact, they do it massively there. It's a faster way to shop , no doubt about that, but is it better?

Online shopping is by far the fastest and most comfortable way to buy some kinds of products. You can see photos and the complete description of the product on the seller's website and they can even take you  deliver the product to your home. That sounds so interesting cool!  To be able to buy a product with just a few "clicks" is  revolutionary!    It is especially useful for specialized products and other technological devices you can't find near home.

As  for disadvantages, the main one would be how to return a defective product because you don't know the seller and the process could be too complicated. In addition to this, as for buying clothing how could you buy some clothes if you haven't tried them before? It's highly likely  the clothes won't fit properly! For food products is necessary  to check the expiration date before buying something.

In short, no shopping method   is perfect and the best option could be to combine these two different ways to buy products based on your needs and   type of product.  Don't  focus on just   one of them.  It's sometimes better usually best to take your time before buying, otherwise you could waste your money."

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