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Essay: Explaining why i agree to study overseas have benefits to students and universities Recently, it has become a trend that many university students select to study overseas this option. There is an argument that studying overseas is considered to have benefits for both the students and the universities. In the following essay, i will explain why i agree with this viewpoint. For the students, the first advantage is they can broaden their horizon by studying oversea, they will be impacted with different cultures, they can communicate with foreigner so that they can have further step to learning their culture and habits. The second benefit is the foreign language can be improved. In this globe world, if you have second or third languages ability, it will have considerable benefits for quickly finding useful information and getting a good job. The third behalf is student can become more mature and independent by living in foreign land alone. They need to deal with everything on their own and struggle to have good performance on their study grade. In addition, it also brings benefits to the universities. First, they can expand the enrollment from the world,the more students enroll the institution, the more profits they can get it. Second, they can easily find a talent student from the world. These talent students can improve the reputation of university and level up the ranking of globe university. That will attract student to apply for admission. By the way of conclusion, there are many benefits to study oversea. Although study in foreign land will spend more money than local, it is definitely a good investment for students future. Students who have study oversea experience can have more confidence to face the globe work or business competition.

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"[...] they will be impacted with different cultures [...]"

they will be impacted by different cultures

"[...] In this globe world [...]"

In this global world

I think the sentences would sound just a little more natural if written the way above. Hope I can be of any help to you!=)

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Essay: Explaining why i agree to study overseas have benefits to students and universities

Recently, it has become a trend that many university students select to study overseas this option. There is an argument that studying overseas is considered to have benefits for both the students and the universities. In the following essay, i will explain why i agree with this viewpoint.

For the students, the first advantage is they can broaden their horizon by studying overseas. They will be impacted with exposed to different cultures and they can communicate with foreigners so that they can have further step to learning their culture and habits. The second benefit is the student's foreign language can be improved. In this global world, if you have a second or third languages ability, it will have a considerable benefits for quickly finding useful information and getting a good job using another language. The third behalf advantage is student can become more mature and independent by living independently  in foreign land by themselves alone. They will learn need to deal with everything on their own and struggle to have good performance   work hard for a good grade.

Additionally, it also brings benefits to the universities. First, they can expand their enrollment possibilities to the entire world.  The more students they enroll the institution, the more profits they can get it. Second, they can easily find a talented students from the world. These talented students can improve the reputation of university and level up increase the ranking of globe a university. That will attract even more students to apply for admission.

By the way of In conclusion, there are many benefits to study overseas. Although study in foreign land will spend cost more money than a local education, it is definitely a good investment for many student's futures. Students who have study overseas study  experience can have more confidence to face  in facing the global work or business competition.

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