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A very positive experience you have had I’d like to tell you about one positive and breathtaking experience which I had last summer. The thing is my husband is quite enthusiastic in motorsport and he offered me to learn how to ride a bike. I had been thinking over about that for 2 months because I understood that this might be very risky and dangerous. At least I decided to try and one sunny day we went to a deserted place in our suburb and started to learn. I’d like to say that it wasn’t so difficult because I can drive a car and riding a bike is a similar activity. I can’t believe that I’m really keen on motorsport and this is my passion nowadays. I ride a bike with my husband from time to time and this experience really changed my life. I’ve met a lot of interesting people, visited a considerable number of competitions and events. And last but not least, one year ago we decided to start our business which related with our hobby and now this is our new way.

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A very positive experience you have had

I’d like to tell you about a positive and breathtaking experience that I had last summer. The thing is my husband is quite enthusiastic about motorsport and he offered to teach me how to ride a motorbike. I had been thinking over about it for 2 months because I understood that this might be very risky and dangerous. At last, I decided to try it and one sunny day we went to a deserted place in our suburb and started to learn. I’d like to say that it wasn’t so difficult because I can drive a car and riding a bike is a similar activity. I can’t believe that I’m really keen on motorsport. It is my passion nowadays. I ride a bike with my husband from time to time and this experience really changed my life. I’ve met a lot of interesting people and visited a considerable number of competitions and events. An Last but not least, one year ago we decided to start a business related to our shared hobby and now this is our new way forward.


Nice work! You included some words and structures that native speakers would use. For example: Last but not least, deserted, keen, considerable. I enjoyed reading this.

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