Answering an e-mail of my new penfriend Lara
Hi, Lara! I am Henrique. I am 40 years old and I am from Rio de Janeiro. One of my hobbies is swimming too! I usually go swimming on the weekends. Otherwise, I do not play tennis. Even if I give my very best, it would be a really bust... However, there are another sports which I like to practice, like running (including trailrunning), cycling, and paddling kayaks. I have got 2 sibblings too, although one brother and one sister, whose names are Tulio and Marcella. I am not a university student anymore. I got graduated in Law last decade. Feel free to write to me and tell me more about you anytime, okay?
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Answering an e-mail from my new pen friend Lara
Hi, Lara! I am Henrique. I am 40 years old and I am from Rio de Janeiro. One of my hobbies is swimming too! I usually go swimming on the weekends. Otherwise, I do not play tennis. Even if I give my very best, it would be a really bust... However, there are other sports which I like to do, like running (including trail running), cycling, and kayaking. I have got 2 sibblings too, although one brother and one sister, whose names are Tulio and Marcella. I am not a university student anymore. I got graduated from a Law program last decade. Feel free to write to me and tell me more about you anytime, okay?Nice work, Henrique!
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Answering an e-mail of my new penfriend Lara my new penfriend Lara's email
Hi, Lara! I am Henrique. I am 40 years old and I am from Rio de Janeiro. One of my hobbies is swimming too ('Swimming is one of my hobbies too' sounds more natural)! I usually go swimming on the weekends. However, I do not play tennis. Even if I gave it my very best, it would be really bad*... However, there are another sports which I like to practice, like running (including trailrunning), cycling, and paddling kayaking. I have got 2 sibblings too, although one is my brother and one the other, my sister: their names are Tulio and Marcella. I am not a university student anymore. I got graduated in Law last a decade ago. Feel free to write to me and tell me more about you anytime, okay?*I'm not sure what you meant by that; I had to guess.
Good work, Henrique!
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Answering an e-mail of my new penfriend Lara
Hi, Lara! I am Henrique. I am 40 years old and I am from Rio de Janeiro. One of my hobbies is swimming too! I usually go swimming on the weekends. Otherwise, I do not play tennis. Even if I give my very best, it would be a really bust (do you mean "I'm not very good"?)... However, there are another sports which I like to practice, like running (including trailrunning), cycling, and paddling kayaks kayaking. I have got 2 sibblings siblings too, although one brother and one sister, whose names are Tulio and Marcella. I am not a university student anymore. I got graduated in Law last decade. Feel free to write to me and tell me more about you anytime, okay?That's a friendly email - I hope she writes back!
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