My Morning Rush
I wake up early and I get up 6:30 am. I go to window and watch out, sometimes I say "Today is good day" but sometimes "A bad day". Then I go to bath and wash my face. Then I go to kitchen and drink a glass of water.
After that I put on my appearance and comb my hair. I leave my home and walk to bus stop. I wait my bus. Sometimes my bus is late so this is no problem. But sometimes my bus don't catch, this is very problem because I late my work.
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My Morning Rush
I wake up early and I get up at 6:30 am. I go to the window and watch look out,. (New sentence) Ssometimes I say, "Today is a good day," but sometimes it's, "A bad day". Then I go to have a bath (you could also say "I go to bathe") and wash my face. Then I go to the kitchen and drink a glass of water.After that I put on my appearance (clothes? or makeup? I'm not sure what you mean here) and comb my hair. I leave my ("my" is implied) home and walk to the bus stop. I wait for my bus. Sometimes my bus is late, so but this is no problem. ButHowever, sometimes my bus don't catch I don't catch my bus, and this is very a big problem because I am late my for (again, "my" is implied) work.
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My Morning Rush
I wake up early and I get up at 6:30 am. I go to the window and look out watch out ( watch out means "be careful), sometimes I say "Today is a good day" but sometimes "A bad day". Then I go to bath to the bathroom and wash my face. Then I go to the kitchen and drink a glass of water.After that I put on my appearance and comb my hair. I leave my home and walk to the bus stop. I wait for my bus. Sometimes my bus is late so this it' s not a problem. But sometimes my bus don't catch doesn't come so this is a big problem very problem because I'm late my for work.
Image: http://smitkins.deviantart.com/art/Lineart-Morning-Rush-38917552
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