"Last night, was rain and today was a cold day,"

Last night, it rained, and today was a cold day.

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"In the morning after I woke up I opened the door of my house, I can't believe that I was seeing a lot leaves anf breaches in my garden, I said: oh it's so dirty, I must clean all things.

(This sentence is very long. Try to form shorter sentences.)

In the morning, after I woke up, I opened the door of my house, and I couldn't believe what I saw - lots of leaves and branches in my garden. I said: "Oh, it's so dirty. I must clean this up."

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"After two hours I had claned my garden and I was tired, I remerber that I had not eaten any thing, I ate cereal with milk and chocolate."

(Again, this sentence is very long. Try to reduce your comma usage and form shorter sentences.)

After two hours, I had cleaned up my garden and was tired. I remembered that I had not eaten anything, so I ate cereal with milk and chocolate.

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"Now I want to make a little orchard in some place of my garden, so, I wiil search information about that."

Now I want to make a little orchard somewhere in my garden, so I will search for more information about that.

Good job, Andres! Keep up the great work. :-)

Good night