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Sevilla in April Hi everybody, My Name is Ignacio, I am from Spain and I like to pracice My English Skills through this web page. There are a lot fo days since my last essay, I hope I have more time and write more essays in the next days. betwwen the ideas that I see in the computer monitor there is one that give me the best inspiration that is " write about you town". Well that I said in the begining of this essay, I'm living in Spain, exactaly in a city called Sevilla, this city is located in the south of Sapain and next week we'll start the famous "Feria de Sevilla" also called "Feria de Abril". During the fair's week, the city recieve a lot of tourist, the Street are crowed all day and local people, women in special, dresses regional clothes. Also is tipical to see people riding in horses during the afternoom. Next week, I'll write more about Sevilla that is a beautiful and nice city in the spring. Thank you in advise for reed my essay..

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Sevilla in April

Hi everybody,
My Name is Ignacio, I am from Spain and I would like to pracice practice My English Skills through this web page. There are a lot fo days It's been a number of days since my last essay. I hope I have more time and to write more essays in over the next few days. betwwen Among the ideas that I see in on the computer monitor, there is one that gives me the best inspiration that which is to write about you town. Well, that As I already said in the begining beginning of this essay, I'm living I live in Spain, exactaly in a city called Sevilla to be precise. This city is located in the south of Sapain Spain, and next week we'll start the famous "Feria de Sevilla" also called "Feria de Abril". During the fair's week of the fair, the city recieve receives a lot of tourists. The Street streets are crowed all day and local people, in particular women in special, dresses dress in regional clothes. It's Also is tipical normal to see people riding in on horses during the afternoom afternoon.

Next week I'll write more about Sevilla that is, a beautiful and nice pleasant city in the spring.

Thank you in advise advance for reed reading my essay..
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Hi Ignacio. Great entry!  I love Spain and have spent a lot of time in Barcelona but want to visit Sevilla one day. Here are a few changes to improve your writing.

Sevilla in April

Hi everybody,
My name is Ignacio. I am from Spain and I like to practice my English skills through this web page. There are a lot of It has been many days since my last essay. I hope I have more time to write more essays in the next days. Between the ideas that I see on the computer monitor, there is one that gives me the best inspiration that is "write about you town." Well that like I said in the beginning of this essay, I'm living in Spain, exactaly specifically in a city called Sevilla. This city is located in the south of Sapain and next week we'll start the famous "Feria de Sevilla" also called "Feria de Abril." During the fair's week, the city receives a lot of tourists, the streets are crowed all day and local people, especially women in special, dresses in regional clothes. Also it is typical to see people riding on horses during the afternoon.

Next week, I'll write more about Sevilla - that is a beautiful and nice city in the spring.

Thank you in advise advance for reading my essay..
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Sevilla in April

Hi everybody,
My Name is Ignacio, I am from Spain and I'd like to pracice my English skills through this web page. There are a lot of days since/It has been a long time since/many days have passed since my last essay, and I hope I have more time and write more essays in the next few/several/couple days. betwwen Among the ideas that I see in the computer monitor online, there is one that gives me the best most inspiration, that is: "write about your town". Well, that like I said in the beginning of this essay, I'm living in Sevilla, Spain, this city which is located in the southern part of Spain and next week we'll start the famous "Feria de Sevilla" also called "Feria de Abril". During the fair's week, the city recieves a lot of tourists. The streets are crowed all day and local people, women in special, regional dresses clothes. Also, it is typical to see people riding in horses (you ride on horses, not in)  during the afternoon.

Next week, I'll write more about Sevilla that which is a beautiful and nice city in the spring.

Thank you in advance for reading my essay..

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