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If you are interested in porcelain and learning English, I hope to have a chance to make friends with you.
My hometown is rich in porcelain, from small to large. I'm also very interested in porcelain.
Although I have had some experience with porcelain, it is still limited. In the future, I will learn it.
If you interested in porcelain and learning English, it's so nice meet you!
Hi Jane,
This is a lovely piece of writing. My changes:
People are interested in activities (like learning to make porcelain): they want to know more about them.
Activities are interesting: they are new and exciting things to do!
'Although I have been in contact, but is still limited.' -- This was a hard sentence. I think I understand what you mean in my correction, but let me know if you mean something else.
Remember to use spaces after punctuation. :)
I hope that helps!
Best,
Julie
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