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Dear Mr. Hanes,
I have been trying to make all the changes over the last two weeks, but it hasn't been easy.
I have been doing exercise four times a week, for 45 minutes or one hour.
I have been getting a Swedish massage twice a week but I haven't had time for getting acupuncture.
I haven't been working more than 8 hours per day and I have been sleeping seven hour every day, therefore I feel less tired
I haven't been drinking more than three coffee per day but it is being very difficult to stop smoking and I have been smoking between ten and twenty cigarretes all days.
I'm angry myself for to smoke so many cigarettes.
The first days of the week I haven't been eating more than 1500 calories per day, but the other days I have been eating around of 1900 calories! I'm always hungry!
I'm doing changes in my lifestyle but I must have more willpower.
Best regards,
Mr. Adams.
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Can someone who speaks English tell me if I have errors?
Dear Mr. Hanes,I have been trying to make all of the lifestyle changes over the last two weeks, but it hasn't been easy.
I have been doing exercises four times a week, for 45 minutes to one hour.
I have been getting a Swedish massage twice a week but I haven't had time for getting acupuncture.
I haven't been working more than 8 hours per day and I have been sleeping seven hours every day, therefore I feel less tired
I haven't been drinking more than three coffees per day but it is very difficult to stop smoking. I have been smoking between ten and twenty cigarettes daily (or you can say: every day)
I'm angry myself for smoking so many cigarettes.
In the beginning of the week I haven't been eating more than 1500 calories per day, but then on the other days I have been eating around 1900 calories! I'm always hungry!
I'm doing all these healthy changes but I must have more willpower.
Best regards,
Mr. Adams.
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Can someone who speaks English tell me if I have errors?
Dear Mr. Hanes,I have been trying to make all the changes ( that you had told me to do) in/ during /over/ the last two weeks, but it hasn't been easy.
I have been doing exercise four times a week, for 45 minutes to an hour each time.
I have also been going for a /getting / Swedish massage twice a week, but I did not have /
I have stopped/ haven't been/ working for more than 8 hours per day, and I have been sleeping seven hour daily/every day; therefore, I feel less tired now.
I haven't been drinking more than three cups of coffee per day, but it is
I'm angry with myself for smoking
For the first few days
I want to make changes in my lifestyle, but I must have more willpower. I'm making
Best regards,
Mr. Adams.
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