Just need a correction if these sentences are wrong
Hello everyone!
Could you please correct these sentences? If they are correct, let me know that with your comment. Thank you very much!
I have no phone now, I has left it at home. It is at home.
At the playground there are three different slides:
Do you want to slide?
Which slide do you want to slide down?
Do you want me to slide (together) with you?
Do you want me to seat next to you? (This is a question to a baby, just for learning English; the baby is sitting on the bench and calling me to seat next to her)
Don't play with my keys. These/They are not a toy.
Climb the bench and sit down next to me (this is addressed to a baby too; the baby is short and needs to climb the bench before she can sit on it)
Let's go (to) see the fish!
Let's go to the pond to see the fish!
When playing with a ball. There is wind that moves the ball apart (some other place):
The ball rolled away. Where is the ball?
Thank you for your attention!
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Just need a correction if these sentences are wrong
Hello, everyone!Could you please correct these sentences? If they are correct, let me know that with your comment. Thank you very much!
Part One
I have no phone now, *as I has have (We use first pronoun "I" with "have" and "am') left it at home. It is at home.(Repeated as you already mentioned that you have left it at home)
*We use conjunctions such as "because", "as", "since", "and" etc to join two main clauses.)
At the playground There are three different slides at the playground. Which one do you want to play with?
Do you want to slide?
Which slide do you want to slide down?
(As your focus is on the different slides, I brought it forward to begin the sentence.)
Do you want me to slide (together) with you?
Do you want to play with me on the slide?
Do you want me to seat sit (verb) ("Seat" is a noun describing any furniture you can sit on. I believe you were referring to the action (sit).) next to you? (This is a question to a baby, just for learning English; the baby is sitting on the bench and calling me to sit seat next to her)
Don't play with my keys. These/They are not toys a toy. (If your keys are separate and not bundled, then someone is treating them as toys (plural). If you write: "Don't play with my bunch of keys", then they are treated as a single unit. You can then write: "This is not a toy."
(The word "They" is used as a subject of a clause. The word "These" is a demonstrative pronoun that we use when pointing to things near us.)
Hope this helps.
Cheers, Lance
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Just need a correction if these sentences are wrong
Hello everyone!Could you please correct these sentences? If they are correct, let me know that with your comment. Thank you very much!
I have no phone now, I have left it at home. It is at home.
At the playground there are three different slides:
Do you want to slide?
Which slide do you want to slide down?
Do you want me to slide (together) with you?
Do you want me to sit down next to you? (This is a question to a baby, just for learning English; the baby is sitting on the bench and calling me to sit next to her)
Don't play with my keys. These/They are not toys.
Climb the bench and sit down next to me (this is aimed to a baby too; the baby is short and needs to climb the bench before she can sit on it)
Let's go (to) see the fish!
Let's go to the pond to see the fish!
When playing with a ball. There is wind that moves the ball away (some other place):
The ball rolled away. Where is the ball?
Thank you for your attention!
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