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"野獸家園"。 请问给我改正。谢谢大家! 是一首优秀的为小童儿们的书。"Where the wild things are" is a excellent book for children. 这一首书明说孩子们的对付强烈感情的认知过程的。This book illustrate the cognitive process by which little children cope with strong emotions. 主人公是一个生他的妈妈气的小孩子。The main characters is a little boy who is very angry at his mother. 他一开始大发雷霆,但是一旦他控制她的怒火并放松,他就想她妈妈。At the beginning he has a fit. however, once he has taken control over his emotions and relaxed, he starts missing his mum. 他终于了解他妈妈真是在乎他。Eventually, he understand that his mother wants only the best for him. 寓意是小的时候感情很难控制,但是很重要。The moral is that although it may be difficult for little chindren to control their emotions, it is very important they learn to do so.

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"野獸家園"。 请问给我改正。谢谢大家!

是一首本优秀的写给为小童儿们的书。"Where the wild things are" is a excellent book for children.

这一首本书明说(揭示)孩子们的对付(应对)强烈感情的认知过程的。This book illustrate the cognitive process by which little children cope with strong emotions.

主人公是一个生他的妈妈气的小孩子。The main characters is a little boy who is very angry at his mother.

他一开始他大发雷霆,但是一旦他控制她他的怒火并放松,他就想她他妈妈。At the beginning he has a fit. however, once he has taken control over his emotions and relaxed, he starts missing his mum.

他终于了解(明白)他妈妈真是真的在乎他。Eventually, he understand that his mother wants only the best for him.

寓意是尽管小的时候感情很难控制,但是这个学习过程很重要。The moral is that although it may be difficult for little chindren to control their emotions, it is very important they learn to do so.
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"野獸家園"。 请问给我改正。谢谢大家!

《野兽家园》(Use 《》 when comes to books,articles,newspaper,magazines,songs and other art work. )是一首本优秀的为小童儿们儿童/小孩子们 写 的书(you can also express the meaning of this sentence translate in "《野兽家园》是一本优秀的少儿读物")。"Where the wild things are" is a excellent book for children.

这一首本 ("一首诗/歌" “一本书/杂志...”)书明说说明了孩子们的对付对于强烈感情情感的认知过程的。This book illustrate the cognitive process by which little children cope with strong emotions.

主人公是一个生他的妈妈气的小孩子。The main characters is a little boy who is very angry at his mother.

他一开始大发雷霆,但是一旦他控制她他的怒火并放松,他就开始想她他的妈妈。At the beginning he has a fit. however, once he has taken control over his emotions and relaxed, he starts missing his mum.

他终于了解他妈妈真是在乎他。Eventually, he understand that his mother wants only the best for him.

这本书的主旨是小孩子可能很难控制自己的情感,但是让他们学会控制情感很重要。The moral is that although it may be difficult for little chindren to control their emotions, it is very important they learn to do so.


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