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Could you check - могли бы вы проверить? (пожалуйста) Let me tell you a few words about myself. My name is Lilija. But my friends call me Lily. The name Lilija has several versions of the origin. According to the most common version, the name Lilija came from the name of the flower "lily" (in Latin "lilium" "White flower".). I am 33 years old. I was born in 14.11.1983. I come from Latvia, I live in Germany I come from a small family. There are four of us in the family. I and my friend and my two sons We get on well with each other. My friend's name is Gerd. The name of the eldest son is Victor and the name of the youngest son is Lennet. The oldest son is 12 years old and the youngest son is 2 years old. I work in the firm of my friend as a secretary In future, I want to be a modeler. I like learning languages In my free time, I usually read. I am a communicative person and I have a lot of friends. My best qualities are patience and creativity. But sometimes I can be lazy. People who know me well, say that I am a reliable person. What about my character, I am a kind person. My family is very important for me.

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Could you check - могли бы вы проверить? (пожалуйста)

Let me tell you a few words about myself.
My name is Lilija.
But my friends call me Lily.
The name Lilija has several versions of the origin. According to the most common version, the name Lilija came from the name of the flower "lily" (in Latin "lilium" "White flower".).

I am 33 years old.
I was born in 14.11.1983.
I come from Latvia, I live in Germany
I come from a small family.
There are four of us in the family.
I and my friend and my two sons
We get on well with each other.
My friend's name is Gerd.
The name of the eldest son is Victor and the name of the youngest son is Lennet.
The oldest son is 12 years old and the youngest son is 2 years old.

I work in the firm of my friend as a secretary

In future, I want to be a modeler.

I like learning languages

In my free time, I usually read.
I am a communicative person and I have a lot of friends.
My best qualities are patience and creativity.
But sometimes I can be lazy.
People who know me well, say that I am a reliable person.
What about my character, I am a kind person.
My family is very important for me.

Could you check?

Let me tell you a few words about myself. My name is Lilija but my friends call me Lily. There are several versions of the origin of the name Lilija. According to the most common version, the name Lilija comes from the flower, "lily" (in Latin, "lilium" or "white flower").

I was born on November 14, 1983 and I am 33 years old. I come from Latvia and live in Germany. I have a small family. There are four of us, my friend and me and my two sons. We get along well with each other (US version).

My friend's name is Gerd and my eldest son, Victor, is twelve years old. My youngest son, Lennet, is two.

I work in my friend's firm as a secretary. In the future, I want to be a modeler. (Not sure of your context here. A fashion model? Or a modeler of material like clay, or of buildings like an architect?) 

I like learning languages and in my free time I usually read. I am a communicative person and I have lots of friends. My best qualities are patience and creativity, though sometimes I can be lazy. People who know me well say that I am reliable. What about my character? I am a kind person and my family is very important to me.



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Could you check - могли бы вы проверить? (пожалуйста)

Let me tell you a few words about myself.
My name is Lilija but my friends call me Lily.
There are several versions about this name's origin. According to the most common version, the name Lilija came from the name of the flower "lily" (in Latin "lilium" "White flower".).

I am 33 years old and was born in 14.11.1983.
I come from Latvia, live in Germany and I come from a small family.
There are four of us in the family;
my partner and my two sons and me/I.
We get on well with each other.
My partner's name is Gerd.
My eldest son is Victor and my youngest son, Lennet.
Victor is 12 years old and Lennet is 2.
I work in my friend's firm as a secretary.
In the future, I want to be a modeler.
I like learning languages
In my free time, I usually read.
I am a communicative person and I have a lot of friends.
My best qualities are patience and creativity but sometimes I can be lazy.
People who know me well say that I am reliable.
As for my character, I am kind. My family is very important to me.

Very well written!

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Could you check - могли бы вы проверить? (пожалуйста)

Let me tell you a few words about myself.
My name is Lilija, but my friends call me Lily.
The name Lilija has There are several versions as to the origin of the name Lilija. According to the most common version, the name Lilija came from the name of the flower "lily" (in Latin "lilium" "White flower".).

I am 33 years old.
I was born on 11/14/1983.
I come from Latvia; I live in Germany
I come from a small family.
There are four of us in the family: my friend, my two sons, and myself.
We get on well with each other.
My friend's name is Gerd.
The name of my eldest son is Victor and the name of my youngest son is Lennet.
My eldest son is 12 years old and my youngest son is 2 years old.
I work in the firm of my friend as a secretary.
In future, I want to be a modeler.
I like learning languages
In my free time, I usually read.
I am a communicative person and I have a lot of friends.
My best qualities are patience and creativity, but sometimes I can be lazy.
People who know me well, say that I am a reliable person.
What about As to my character, I am a kind person.
My family is very important to me.
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nice intro about yourself also i think the patience Gold key for many issues in our life and Creativity give our life something from beauty i wish the best for your life :)

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