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Maps 1 The maps illustrate before and after an island have been changed through construction for tourist services. According to the first map, we can see huge island with the beach in the west. The length of island is almost 100 metres. The second map shows that the island have been changed alot. There are lots of buildings on the island. There are two accomodation areas, one of them is on the west of the island. The west accomodation units are near the beach which is connected with footpath and other one in on the centre of the island. There is a restaurant between them which is located in north and the bottom of restaurant, there is reception block that surrounded by vehicle track. This track goes down to the pier in south of the island that use for sailing. Also people can go to the beach on the west of island for swimming. Overall, the island have been lots of changed for tourist convinces and turned into good place for them.

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Maps 1

The maps show an island illustrate before and after an island have it has been changed through construction for tourist services.
According to On the first map, we can see a huge island with a the beach in the west. The length of the island is almost 100 metres.
The second map shows that the island has have been changed a lot. There are lots of buildings on the island. There are two accommodation areas, one of which them is on in the west of the island. The west accommodation units are near the beach, which is connected with the footpath, and the other one (unit?) is in the centre of the island. There is a restaurant between them which is located in the north and, at the bottom of (behind?) the restaurant, there is a reception block that is surrounded bye a vehicle track. This track goes down to the pier in the south of the island that is used for sailing. Also people can go to the beach in the west of the island for swimming.
Overall, the island has have been lots of changed a lot by for tourist conveniences and turned into a good place for them.

Well done.  Note my punctuation changes too.  I have added a couple of notes in () where the meaning was unclear.  You need to do more work on the difference in usage between "show" an "illustrate" and on how to use "according to".

Make sure you check subject/verb agreement.

You need to study articles more.

Good luck.  Kind regards, Michael 

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