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Being a celebrity _ such as a famous film star or sports personality _brings problems as well Being a celebrity _ such as a famous film star or sports personality _ brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems? Everything have two sides and being famous and successful like celebrities are as well. It is obvious that being celebrity has lots of advantages but it also has some drawbacks too. In my opinion, advantages are stronger than disadvantages. In this essay, the pros and cons of this will be discussed. The most obvious bright side of being super star is money. They earn high amount of money compared to other kinds of job. For instance, everyone knows that the income of the teachers are lower than celebrities. They spend their money on everything that they want and they can travel to many countries or buy luxury cars or other expensive items. Another positive outlook on this subject is that celebrities are famous and attract lots of attention to themselves and also they have large numbers of fans that really love them and those people who have dream to be like them. Famous people are being role model of most of their fans. They can be inspiration to millions of people and this is biggest achievement of a human life and being celebrity gives you the chance to be one. On the orher hand, the greatest weak point of being super star is that they do not hVe privacy in their lives. They always centre of attention of paparazzi. They do not have social life . For example, when they want go out with their friends or family , they are followed by people who want take a picture of them to sell the magazine or internet blog. Overall, actor, sports personality, super model .. are almost have everything that other people dream about it such as, popularity, money, respect but they suffer from public life that they have. I believe strongly that this kind of occupation have more advantageous than disadvantages.

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Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

Everything has two sides. Being famous and successful like many celebrities are is also a two sided coin. It is obvious that being a celebrity has many advantages, but it also has some drawbacks, too. In my opinion, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay, the pros and cons of being a celebrity will be discussed.

The most obvious bright side of being a super star is money. These people earn high amounts of money compared to those working in other kinds of jobs. For instance, everyone knows that the income of teachers is lower than celebrities. Celebrities are able to spend their money on everything that they want and they can travel to many countries or buy luxury cars or other expensive items. Another advantage is that celebrities are famous and attract lots of attention to themselves. They have large numbers of fans that really love them and those people who have a dream to be like them. Famous people serve as role models for most of their fans. They can be an inspiration to millions of people and this is the biggest achievement of a human life. Being a celebrity gives you the chance to be such a role model.


On the other hand, the greatest weak point of being a super star is that they do not have privacy in their lives. They are always the centre of attention of paparazzi. They do not have a social life . For example, when they want to go out with their friends or family , they are followed by people who want to take their picture to sell to the magazines or internet blogs.

Overall, being a famous actor, sports personality or super model .. is almost everything that other people dream about having, such as popularity, money and respect, but they suffer from the exposed public life that they have. I believe strongly, however, that this kind of occupation has more advantages than disadvantages.

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Being a celebrity _ such as a famous film star or sports personality _brings problems as well

Being a celebrity _ such as a famous film star or sports personality _ brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

Everything has two sides and being famous and successful like celebrities as well. It is obvious that being a celebrity has lots of advantages but it also has some drawbacks too. In my opinion, the advantages are stronger than the disadvantages. In this essay, the pros and cons of this will be discussed.

The most obvious bright side of being a superstar is money. They earn large  amounts of money compared to other kinds of job. For instance, everyone knows that the income of the teachers are lower than celebrities. They spend their money on everything that they want and they can travel to many countries or buy luxury cars or other expensive items. Another positive outlook on this subject is that celebrities are famous and attract lots of attention to themselves and also they have large numbers of fans that really love them and those people who have dreams to be like them. Famous people are a role model for most of their fans. They can be an inspiration to millions of people and this is the biggest achievement of a human life and being a celebrity gives you the chance to do this.

On the other hand, the greatest weak point of being super star is that they do not have privacy in their lives. They are always the centre of attention of paparazzi. They do not have a private life . For example, when they want go out with their friends or family , they are followed by people who want take a picture of them to sell to a magazine or internet blog.

Overall, actors, sports personalities, super models .. have almost everything that other people dream about, such as, popularity, money and respect but they suffer from the public life that they have. I believe strongly that this kind of occupation has more advantages than disadvantages.


Nice work Ghasal, pay attention to articles and verb/noun agreements

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