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First notebook entry: Introducing myself i am zero, strenge name while easy to be remembered, well healthy man with a lot of passion ,like to meet any friends. as it is first time being here not to much to say. that is it

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对于我先前的错误，我诚挚地向您道歉。我不想找诸如“孰能无过”的理由，错了就是错了，知识也不够扎实罢了。但我以后一定会注意的。
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好吧 实际上 a lot of 可以修饰不可数、、
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello, I am zero. Strenge name, but it is easy to be remembered.(没必要这么用）Well, I'm a healthy man with a lot of passion (passion是不可数的，你个小白）I'd like to meet make friends with you. As it is first time I've beingen here, there's not too much to say. And that is it.

大爷···亏你这么自信····这么多语病····。另外，你要注意，英语是每一句都要主语的，而且你的断句很有问题。

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