JUST A DIRAY ON Apr.22nd (Writing about breakfast)
I would like to someone to correct my diary. Could you do that for me, please?
JUST A DIARY ON Apr.22nd
What do you eat for breakfast? my answer to the question is jsut a piece of bread with a various of jam. A friend of mine who lives in America asked me the same question, and I answered so. I remember that his looks surprised with my answer even now. I mean he thought All Japanese is supposed to eat just Miso-soup and much rice for breakfast. Yeah, as he say, it's said that miso-soup and rice, natto are general Japanese food for breakfast. But, just becasue that is it, Japanese people eat them every morning. You know, I don't eat them... or rather, I ususally have American breakfast like a piece of bread. Oh, I have something to tell you... It is a tip for you and works for you surely (Perhaps you know it, though). it is that breakfast seems to be the most important on health, I mean, you should take a lot of energy at the morning than at night, dinner. Accoring to news of Japan , unfortunately, people who is off to their work office without breakfast exsist a lot in Japan. Of course I always have, you know, want to keep to be healthy body.
So...I have a qusetion for you. Would you tell me other way of saying "By the way". I often change the topic in every my notebook entry, and when I think that I want to do so, I use this word "by the way" difinately. But I want to know other way of saying this word. Thank you.
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JUST A DIRAY DIARY ON Apr.22nd (Writing about breakfast)
I would like to someone to correct my diary. Could you do that for me, please?JUST A DIARY ON Apr.22nd
What do you eat for breakfast? My answer to the question is jsut just a piece of bread with a various of jam variety of jams. A friend of mine who lives in America asked me the same question, and I answered so. Even now, I remember that his looks he looked surprised with my answer even now. I mean, he thought that all Japanese is are supposed to eat just miso-soup and much large quantities of rice for breakfast. Yeah, as he say said, it's said that miso-soup, and rice, and natto are general Japanese food for breakfast. But, just becasue because that is it, Japanese people eat them every morning. You know, I don't eat them... or rather, I ususally usually have an American breakfast like a piece of bread. Oh, I have something to tell you... It is a tip for you and will certainly works work for you surely (Perhaps you know it, though). It is that breakfast seems to be the most important on for health. I mean, you should take in a lot of more energy at in the morning than at night (dinner). Accoring According to the news of Japan , unfortunately, people who is are off to their work office ["their work" or "their office"] without breakfast exsist exist a lot in Japan. Of course I always have, you know, want to keep to be healthy body. [Not sure what you mean by this last sentence. Maybe "Of course I always have eaten breakfast, you know, because I want to keep a healthy body.]
[This is actually an common phrase in American and British English: "Breakfast is the most important meal of the day."]
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JUST A DIRAY ON Apr.22nd (Writing about breakfast)
I would like someone to correct my diary. Could you do that for me, please?JUST A DIARY ON Apr.22nd
What do you eat at breakfast? my answer to the question is just a piece of bread with a various jam. A friend of mine who lives in America, asked me the same question, and I answered so. I remember that he was surprised with my answer even now. I mean he thought All Japanese is supposed to eat just Miso-soup and much rice for breakfast. Yeah, as he said, it's said that miso-soup and rice, natto are general Japanese food at breakfast. But just because Japanese people eat them every morning. You know, I don't eat them... Or rather, I usually have an american breakfast like a piece of bread. Oh, I have something to tell you... It is a tip for you and works for you surely (Perhaps you know it, though). that breakfast seems to be very important for health, I mean, you should take more energy at morning than night. Accoring to japenese newspapers.
Unfortunately, some of japenese people go to work without breakfast .
In my case I always have breakfast , you know, i want to keep my body healthy.
"By the way"(( = In fact = At the event..... ))
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JUST A DIRAY DIARY ON Apr.22nd (Writing about breakfast) What do you eat for breakfast? My answer to the question is just a piece of bread with a variety of jams. A friend of mine who lives in America asked me the same question, and I answered so. Even now, I remember that his looked surprised with my answer. I mean, he thought that all Japanese are supposed to eat just miso-soup and large quantities of rice for breakfast. Yeah, as he said, it's said that miso-soup, and rice, and natto are general Japanese food for breakfast. But, just because that is it, Japanese people eat the every morning. You know, I don't eat them...or rather, I usually have an American breakfast like a piece of bread. Oh, I have something to tell you...It is a tip for you and will certainly work for you surely (Perhaps you know it, though). It is that breakfast seems to be the most important on for health. I mean, you should take in a lot of more energy in the morning than at night (dinner). According to the news of Japan, unfortunately, people who are off to their office without breakfast exist a lot in Japan. Of course I always have eaten breakfast, you know, because I want to keep a health body.
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I see. Thank you so much. I will use these advterbs and adverbial phrases in my upcoming notebook entry. Your explanation is really understandable to me. Thanks again!
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"By the way" is usually only said when someone is introducing a new topic that relates to the current topic. "I met Greg for lunch yesterday." "Really? How is he doing? By the way, do you want to get lunch next week?" This works because lunch was already mentioned. Some people will use "by the way" to introduce completely unrelated topics. This is common, but not quite correct. To introduce a new topic in a smooth way, you could start your sentences with any one of a variety of helpful adverbs and adverbial phrases such as "incidentally" (usually means, "I will quickly mention something that is related but off-topic, and will then get back to the main topic); "anyway" (used in casual conversation to end one topic and begin another, usually towards the end of a conversation); and "on another note" (used to transition to a completely unrelated topic). Here you have used "so" to signal the transition, and this usage is fine, although also conversational and informal. You could also have used "now" ("Now I have a question for you.")
It is often best, however, to end one topic cleanly and begin the next cleanly, without any interjection.
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