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Check it please Dear Sir/Madam, I am writting to complain about your restaurant "Fairy", which I visited 2 day ago. I ordered the fried potato, grill from chicken filet and glass of tomato juice. All was very delicious and I was satisfied. I felt off and a stomach very was ill, when I came home. I caused an ambulance, and doctors said it was poisoning. Doctors said me to remain in a hospital and complete course treatment. I was very sad after this news. Maybe was I poisoned in your restaurant? If I were you, I had checked the presence of virus in a meal. I hope all will be good or a restaurant will lose costumers. Yours faithfully, Marya.

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Check it, please.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to complain about your restaurant "Fairy", which I visited 2 day two days (We try to describe small numbers using words.)ago. I ordered the fried potato, grilled from chicken fillet and a glass of tomato juice. All The food was very delicious and I was satisfied. I felt off and a I had a severe stomachache very was ill, when I came home. I caused called an ambulance, and the doctors said that my condition it was due to food poisoning.

The doctors advised said me to remain in the hospital till I had completely recovered and complete course treatment. I was very sad after receiving this news. Maybe was Perhaps I have consumed contaminated food poisoned (If you say that someone poisoned you, it means someone was intentionally trying to harm you by giving you poison. However, when we use the phrase "food poisoning", it just means that the food was contaminated with bacteria or virus.) in your restaurant. If I were you, I had checked will check for (**You are indicating a hypothetical situation where you were the owner of the restaurant. Hence, you do not use past perfect tense)the presence of virus in your ingredientsa meal. I hope your restaurant is not responsible for my plight, or else you will lose  all will be good or a restaurant will lose costumers. customers.

Yours faithfully, Marya.

Marya.

Hi Marya, 

I hope you have recovered and are in the pink of health. 

Just a suggestion:

To indicate a hypothetical situation, we can write: 

If I were you, I would do this. / If I were you, I will do that

Hope this helps.
Cheers, Lance

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Check it please

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writting to complain about your restaurant "Fairy", which I visited 2 days ago. I ordered the fried potato, grilled chicken grill from chicken fillet and a glass of tomato juice. All was very The meal was delicious and I was satisfied. When I got home I  started feeling sick and I had a sore stomach. felt off and a stomach very was ill, when I came home. I called  caused an ambulance, and the doctors said it was food poisoning.
The doctors told said me to remain in a hospital and complete the/my course of treatment. I was very upset sad after this news/their diagnosis. Maybe was I poisoned in your restaurant? If I were you, I had  would check checked the presence of bacteria in your kitchen. virus in a meal. I hope you find the problem and do something about it all will be good or your a restaurant will lose costumers.

Yours faithfully, Marya.

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